His Silence
Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "His Silence - Chapter 56"Why did a 14 year old boy murder his parents?
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I can understand Danielle not being interested in Oliver "in that way." Callum doesn't seem interested in Eve "in that way" either. The scream certainly adds something to the dynamic. One correction needed: for me to (jump) . . .
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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I can understand Danielle not being interested in Oliver "in that way." Callum doesn't seem interested in Eve "in that way" either. The scream certainly adds something to the dynamic. One correction needed: for me to (jump) . . .
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Excellent dialogue again building pace and interest. You're enjoying giving us little teasers and then abruptly closing down the conversation so that we're still in the dark about the murder. I like the seamless change of scene from the restaurant to the house with the sound of the sea reminding us of the atmospheric location. Great ending too. Well done! Debbie
for me to (jump) straight into his arms
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Excellent dialogue again building pace and interest. You're enjoying giving us little teasers and then abruptly closing down the conversation so that we're still in the dark about the murder. I like the seamless change of scene from the restaurant to the house with the sound of the sea reminding us of the atmospheric location. Great ending too. Well done! Debbie
for me to (jump) straight into his arms
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
It is good to know Callum isn't as sure he and Eve are an item as she. I would have liked Danielle to say there was no way she would end up with Oliver rather than sat she wasn't going ot rush into it. Not I going to read you other post to find out who screamed.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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It is good to know Callum isn't as sure he and Eve are an item as she. I would have liked Danielle to say there was no way she would end up with Oliver rather than sat she wasn't going ot rush into it. Not I going to read you other post to find out who screamed.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Beth, I;m pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
Now, that doesn't sound good. How is it going to affect Danielle and Callum? You have me wanting to know, Jacob. Hurry and write the next chapter.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Now, that doesn't sound good. How is it going to affect Danielle and Callum? You have me wanting to know, Jacob. Hurry and write the next chapter.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Carol, it'll be posted soon. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
What scream? I glad Danielle got to speak alone with Callum. They needed this time and to clear up a few things. I really like this story and can't wait to read more.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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What scream? I glad Danielle got to speak alone with Callum. They needed this time and to clear up a few things. I really like this story and can't wait to read more.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.