Anatomy of a Marriage Ch 8
Continuation of the story of a Florida family.16 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
Lots of realizations coming to light for Marsha. The money is not a huge surprise but I sure am wondering what he has been doing with all that money he's been holding old. Good chapter. Enjoyed.
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Lots of realizations coming to light for Marsha. The money is not a huge surprise but I sure am wondering what he has been doing with all that money he's been holding old. Good chapter. Enjoyed.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
Comment from joann r romei
This read fine, you set up a lot of tension and concern for this family, alcoholism is not a joke and affects millions unfortunately, no errors noted.
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This read fine, you set up a lot of tension and concern for this family, alcoholism is not a joke and affects millions unfortunately, no errors noted.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
Comment from jim vecchio
My wife and I had a good system. I'd give her the check. I kept $75. Of course, if either of us needed more, there was no problem. We were on the some page.Your story progresses well nd you left us t the best possible moment to leave us wanting for more.
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My wife and I had a good system. I'd give her the check. I kept $75. Of course, if either of us needed more, there was no problem. We were on the some page.Your story progresses well nd you left us t the best possible moment to leave us wanting for more.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Oh-oh. Bridge over troubled waters it seems and we in Western NC would know, with the arrival and departure of Ms Helene. What a storm. Anyhow, a chapter settng things up for the future, and a remembrance of how things worked with men in the 50's
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Oh-oh. Bridge over troubled waters it seems and we in Western NC would know, with the arrival and departure of Ms Helene. What a storm. Anyhow, a chapter settng things up for the future, and a remembrance of how things worked with men in the 50's
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
Comment from Jacob1395
I can really feel how the realisation of this new reality is hitting Martha as she comes to terms with Trenton not being by her side. You did a great job of bringing her emotions through in your writing. Another well written chapter, Beth. I enjoyed reading it.
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I can really feel how the realisation of this new reality is hitting Martha as she comes to terms with Trenton not being by her side. You did a great job of bringing her emotions through in your writing. Another well written chapter, Beth. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
Comment from royowen
Marsha has received an amount of money twice the normal amount of what she's used to, but she hears it's the normal amount, what's going on here? Then she hears about her youngest daughter having trouble, Marsha's called to school, mmmmh beautifully written, this is such a good story, bless you, Roy
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Marsha has received an amount of money twice the normal amount of what she's used to, but she hears it's the normal amount, what's going on here? Then she hears about her youngest daughter having trouble, Marsha's called to school, mmmmh beautifully written, this is such a good story, bless you, Roy
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Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Marsha certainly has her hands full, and now problems at school, which will also keep Marsha up at night. (FYI, you have Tracy spelled Tracie in the list of characters at the end of this.)
A well-told chapter and certainly believable. I'm anxious to see where the money has gone.
So, she is getting MORE money in Trenton's check now that he isn't taking a large cut?
See you next time, Beth.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Marsha certainly has her hands full, and now problems at school, which will also keep Marsha up at night. (FYI, you have Tracy spelled Tracie in the list of characters at the end of this.)
A well-told chapter and certainly believable. I'm anxious to see where the money has gone.
So, she is getting MORE money in Trenton's check now that he isn't taking a large cut?
See you next time, Beth.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Pam. I appreciate you pointing on the discrepancy in the spelling of name. Now I need to back into other chapters and see if I might have made the same mistake.
Beth
Comment from Wendy G
A well-written and gripping story with a very compelling ending. The next crisis ... with one of her children. As well there is the apparent money discrepancy - exactly what has he been doing with the rest? How betrayed and alone she must feel!
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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A well-written and gripping story with a very compelling ending. The next crisis ... with one of her children. As well there is the apparent money discrepancy - exactly what has he been doing with the rest? How betrayed and alone she must feel!
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thak you, Wendy. I appreciate your review and f appreciate your comments.
Beth
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Despite all that Marsha is going through, she obvious still has feelings for her husband and worried about how he was feeling since being rehabilitated and away from home. I wonder if her husband is giving her a second thought. It seems that her husband has been deceiving her in more ways than one. Hopefully she will gain some strength to cope with it all as it is stressful and hurtful. And now her precious daughter is in some kind of trouble. These challenges are mounting. Another fine chapter in your interesting story Beth, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Despite all that Marsha is going through, she obvious still has feelings for her husband and worried about how he was feeling since being rehabilitated and away from home. I wonder if her husband is giving her a second thought. It seems that her husband has been deceiving her in more ways than one. Hopefully she will gain some strength to cope with it all as it is stressful and hurtful. And now her precious daughter is in some kind of trouble. These challenges are mounting. Another fine chapter in your interesting story Beth, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Dolly. Your comment show you are really into my story so I happy about that. I hope I can continue to hold your interest.
Beth
Comment from Ric Myworld
With everything seemingly going wrong already, now the problem with the daughter might push things completely over the edge. Thanks for sharing. ......................................
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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With everything seemingly going wrong already, now the problem with the daughter might push things completely over the edge. Thanks for sharing. ......................................
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Ric. Life has a way sometimes of not letting up when things start going wrong. This is based too closely to reality.
Beth