Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

I assumed she could walk, and she was the killer. She is likely also crazy. I Think may Poe was as well. I had to memorize Telltale Heart and recite it for audience at school. He wrote some eerie ones. Was this the end of the story. It is good place to end it with the two dead bodies locked away in a secret room. But then her poor sister may go to jail for killing her.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

You have one more chapter to go that will wrap things up for the story. Thanks so much for the review and for following this weird story.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

OMG! How the heck will they find them? I hope her sister knows the secret room. What a horrid thing to do! I'm glad you have written the next part already, I'm off to read it. Wonderful!! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

Thanks for reading this story, Sandra. I am not a fan of psychological thrillers either and surprised myself when I started writing it. Have no idea where it came from and you can see it ended quickly, too. It's been fun but I had enough.
smiles, Carol

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 27-Oct-2024

Now, let's get back to Eleanor and Garth. Like, NOW or at least, on the 1st of November!! LOL xxx

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

Funny, I was just thinking about that myself. You should enter the contest. You'd win!

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

So she killed Peyton herself! Because he had fallen for Sharice? How did she get him into that little room? Is she really disabled, or can she really walk? So many questions - but I am totally amazed by your imagination! Well done.
Wendy

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

Thank you, Wendy! I'm not sure where in my mind this story was discovered from, but it certainly was a creepy one. Thank you for reading and for enjoying it.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

So, she did kill Payton and now herself. Her sister did escape, didn't she? Has she always been crazy, or has it just taken over her mind as she learned she could walk, and Payton still didn't love her?

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

It's been a gradual occurrence, but she still remained a crafty person, holding a grudge with her sister. Her walking was psychological, and she used it to her advantage.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill

Excellent

This was glouriously bat shit crazy, excuse the language.
I hope we find a letter that explains when and how she got her legs back. If she ever lost them. Wonderful. If I had a six you would have got it. What a great wild and wicked mind you have. Karen

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

Coming from you...I will take this review as a virtual six and awesome thoughts. Thank you so much, Karen. I really enjoyed the review and your thoughts.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

Wow, Fiona is really crazy! Wait, she can walk? Why has she been using that wheelchair all this time? I wasn't expecting that. There are so many twists in this story to keep your readers guessing. Well done! Carol

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

Her walking was psychological and once she learned she could use it to her advantage, she did just that...plotting and scheming while Sharice waited on her and did all the work. Thanks so much for the review. Hope you enjoy the ending.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Well, well well, this is like a Stephen King novel, where those wonderful twists and turns come in the novel. This is indeed, a step in another direction, this is brilliant Carol, a real classic, beautifully done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

Don't you love all the twists and turns where nothing goes as expected. I hope you enjoy the last chapter and it's surprises too. Thanks so much, Roy. I truly appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Jacob1395

Excellent

I loved how you ended this chapter, Carol, that was on a really chilling note. I could feel the rage emanating from Fiona in her dialogue and in her action and I thought this was really well done. I can't wait to read more.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024

Fiona was definitely a bit of Edgar Poe and found how she could manipulate everyone with the wheelchair. Except for her love of Peyton and her misconceptions. Hope you enjoy the final chapter.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

omg! You needed to post this tomorrow so I had a 6!! Wow. Very Alfred Hitchcock-like! Love the ending so much. This was my favorite story of yours to date. Great job, Carol.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024

Surprise! There will be one more chapter tomorrow to tie things up. Thanks for the generous thought on this chapter though. I appreciate it very much. You really thought it was that good? Most thought it was to creepy.
Smiles and hugs, Carol

reply by Marilyn Hamilton on 26-Oct-2024

There is no such thing as too creepy!!!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Carol, Now this is a spooky chapter you have penned. It reminds me of a movie from a long time ago. I hope there are more chapters to this. Very good descriptive words and great imagery from your words. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024

One more chapter I think...To tie up everything and then it will be time to start a new one with Eleanor again. Thanks so much for enjoying the story.
Smiles and hugs, Carol