His Silence
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
"Grace" didn't exactly act ecstatic about Oliver's confession that he has dreamed of her for years. He really doesn't have much common sense if he thinks she will be attracted to him in just a few days. Apparently, he is so used to getting his own way, he forgot she is not a disciple of his.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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"Grace" didn't exactly act ecstatic about Oliver's confession that he has dreamed of her for years. He really doesn't have much common sense if he thinks she will be attracted to him in just a few days. Apparently, he is so used to getting his own way, he forgot she is not a disciple of his.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have no clue how Danielle is going to get out of this one. Oliver just might force her to be with him. I can see that happening. She needs to get out of that house as soon as possible and take Callum with her.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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I have no clue how Danielle is going to get out of this one. Oliver just might force her to be with him. I can see that happening. She needs to get out of that house as soon as possible and take Callum with her.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Barbara. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Such a great ending with the cheese wafting into her nostrils. I can feel the nausea rising. This is the most uncomfortable meeting and once again she's being obliged to go against her better instincts in her desperation to get to the bottom of this. Did Oliver have an affair with Danielle's mother or even father Harvey? Probably way off and you'll not going to say anyway. But why has he always felt the connection? Thanks again, Jacob. You cleverly keep the secrets well hidden. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Such a great ending with the cheese wafting into her nostrils. I can feel the nausea rising. This is the most uncomfortable meeting and once again she's being obliged to go against her better instincts in her desperation to get to the bottom of this. Did Oliver have an affair with Danielle's mother or even father Harvey? Probably way off and you'll not going to say anyway. But why has he always felt the connection? Thanks again, Jacob. You cleverly keep the secrets well hidden. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you Debbie, there's still quite a few more chapters to go. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I enjoyed this chapter! The tension between Grace and Oliver is excellent. I could feel it. I love how you captured her internal conflict. I think we can all relate. The way you describe her reaction to his hand squeeze really brings the moment to life and was so well done. I can feel the weight of her emotions and the awkwardness of the situation. Keep up the fantastic work. I can't wait to see where this goes!
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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I enjoyed this chapter! The tension between Grace and Oliver is excellent. I could feel it. I love how you captured her internal conflict. I think we can all relate. The way you describe her reaction to his hand squeeze really brings the moment to life and was so well done. I can feel the weight of her emotions and the awkwardness of the situation. Keep up the fantastic work. I can't wait to see where this goes!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you Michael, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
Quite the wake-up call! Now, how is she going to escape, or will they even let her and Callum leave? It's been a strange place from the beginning. Maybe she can get help from Max. Great job, Jacob! You are bringing the story along quite well. Good luck!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Quite the wake-up call! Now, how is she going to escape, or will they even let her and Callum leave? It's been a strange place from the beginning. Maybe she can get help from Max. Great job, Jacob! You are bringing the story along quite well. Good luck!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Carol, and for the six stars as well. I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
You did a wonderful job with this chapter. You really brought out her emotions. She is thinking exactly what I would have been thinking. I was pretty sure this was where this was headed. I hope she doesn't let him hypnotize her again. He could get into her head. I'll bet she won't be able to persuade Collum to leave now.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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You did a wonderful job with this chapter. You really brought out her emotions. She is thinking exactly what I would have been thinking. I was pretty sure this was where this was headed. I hope she doesn't let him hypnotize her again. He could get into her head. I'll bet she won't be able to persuade Collum to leave now.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the six stars, Beth. I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Kahlani
What an awkward position to be in. I feel bad for Grace because she didn't ask for this. Is Oliver delusional? I guess I will just have to read the next chapter to find out. A great read.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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What an awkward position to be in. I feel bad for Grace because she didn't ask for this. Is Oliver delusional? I guess I will just have to read the next chapter to find out. A great read.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.