His Silence
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Oliver doesn't seem to be talking about student and teacher. He seems to be interesting in a more intimate relationship. I don't think Danielle will do very well pretending to be enamored of him. I am interested in seeing where you are going with this story.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Oliver doesn't seem to be talking about student and teacher. He seems to be interesting in a more intimate relationship. I don't think Danielle will do very well pretending to be enamored of him. I am interested in seeing where you are going with this story.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Oh dear, he really means business with Danielle doesn't he? And still just 2 days for Callum to be practically fixed up with Eve and now Oliver being so presumptuous. Poor Danielle, caught up here in his web and yet unable to leave until she finds out more. You've managed to weave a compelling story here, Jacob, which continues to fascinate. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Oh dear, he really means business with Danielle doesn't he? And still just 2 days for Callum to be practically fixed up with Eve and now Oliver being so presumptuous. Poor Danielle, caught up here in his web and yet unable to leave until she finds out more. You've managed to weave a compelling story here, Jacob, which continues to fascinate. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am guessing from the last paragraph that Oliver is thinking he and Danielle might become a couple. I do hope Max can get back to her with more information. I can't wait to read more.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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I am guessing from the last paragraph that Oliver is thinking he and Danielle might become a couple. I do hope Max can get back to her with more information. I can't wait to read more.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
Well, now we find out Oliver's intentions as if we don't already know. How will he react if she says no...Or worse yet, what if she can't be truthful and lets him believe they can be a couple? The hammer is about to fall!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Well, now we find out Oliver's intentions as if we don't already know. How will he react if she says no...Or worse yet, what if she can't be truthful and lets him believe they can be a couple? The hammer is about to fall!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Carol. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from BethShelby
It sounds like Oliver would like to have a young wife and he has romantic intentions for Danielle. I hope she is turned off by the idea and wants no part of it. I wonder if he has taken other women out to eat.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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It sounds like Oliver would like to have a young wife and he has romantic intentions for Danielle. I hope she is turned off by the idea and wants no part of it. I wonder if he has taken other women out to eat.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Beth. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What an interesting story! The way you shared Grace's internal feelings about her relationship with Oliver is beautifully done. I can feel her curiosity. The characters feel natural. Especially the dialogue about food and the subtle tension in Oliver's demeanor. I like the way you sprinkled in details about Grace's past, like her fondness for bookshops. I'm eager to see where their conversation leads! Keep up the fantastic work!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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What an interesting story! The way you shared Grace's internal feelings about her relationship with Oliver is beautifully done. I can feel her curiosity. The characters feel natural. Especially the dialogue about food and the subtle tension in Oliver's demeanor. I like the way you sprinkled in details about Grace's past, like her fondness for bookshops. I'm eager to see where their conversation leads! Keep up the fantastic work!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Thank you, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.