A Brush With Death
Share Your Story contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from marilyn quillen
Amazing story, you are so lucky to be alive septic infection and covid both, you really had a fight on your hands but the good Lord was with you and thankfully you are still with us. Fantastically written story my friend, you tell your story well
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Amazing story, you are so lucky to be alive septic infection and covid both, you really had a fight on your hands but the good Lord was with you and thankfully you are still with us. Fantastically written story my friend, you tell your story well
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024
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Hi Marilyn, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from RodG
Whoa! Your experience is definitely one I would not want to share. Spending all that time, first in a hospital and then in a nursing home, often isolated. I am so glad you got better and can write so candidly about the experience.
One suggestion: to gain more reviewers, divide this into SEVERAL paragraphs. One large paragraph in small font deters readership.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Whoa! Your experience is definitely one I would not want to share. Spending all that time, first in a hospital and then in a nursing home, often isolated. I am so glad you got better and can write so candidly about the experience.
One suggestion: to gain more reviewers, divide this into SEVERAL paragraphs. One large paragraph in small font deters readership.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2024
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Hi Rod, thank you for your comments and review I will take you up on your suggestion. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am glad you overcame this infection and went from strength to strength and also improved your singing too. Thank you for sharing your touching story here, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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I am glad you overcame this infection and went from strength to strength and also improved your singing too. Thank you for sharing your touching story here, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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Hi Dolly, thank you for your comments and review. Love donna xx
Comment from papa55mike
That was a perfect song to sing after that ordeal. Grace brought you through it with love from the Savior. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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That was a perfect song to sing after that ordeal. Grace brought you through it with love from the Savior. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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Hi mike, thank you for your six stars and your comments, review. and good luck wishes. Dove