Brain Power
A flash - A good theory22 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a good take on memory foam, I wonder if it would work with the pillows too. A good theory, Carol and a fun flash fiction read too. Your brain must work in overload with all your writes. Still smiling,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
This is a good take on memory foam, I wonder if it would work with the pillows too. A good theory, Carol and a fun flash fiction read too. Your brain must work in overload with all your writes. Still smiling,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 26-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2024
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Hi, Valda... Wouldn't it be wonderful to have memory pillows or shoes...Lay down and dream beautiful thoughts or wear the shoes and remember what you were doing? Thanks so much for the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Kind of sounds like mom is sort of like me, needing some memory foam. Oh, when will they come up with a memory foam brain for old people who get lost in the grocery store. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
Kind of sounds like mom is sort of like me, needing some memory foam. Oh, when will they come up with a memory foam brain for old people who get lost in the grocery store. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Oh how I wish these shoes came in my size... I would buy every pair I could get my hands on. It's starting to get scary at times when I don't remember what I did or was about to do.... especially since I haven't been enjoying the "spirits" and not the Halloween kind either.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
LOL, It works maybe I should get some of those. I have a pretty good memory of what happened seventy years ago but not what I go from room to room and wonder what I came for.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
LOL, It works maybe I should get some of those. I have a pretty good memory of what happened seventy years ago but not what I go from room to room and wonder what I came for.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Oh how I wish these shoes came in my size... I would buy every pair I could get my hands on. It's starting to get scary at times when I don't remember what I did or was about to do.... especially since I haven't been enjoying the "spirits" and not the Halloween kind either.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
That did make me laugh at the end, I could just imagine the look on her child's face as she said that. Another engaging short piece, Carol. I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
That did make me laugh at the end, I could just imagine the look on her child's face as she said that. Another engaging short piece, Carol. I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Oh how I wish these shoes came in my size... I would buy every pair I could get my hands on. It's starting to get scary at times when I don't remember what I did or was about to do.... especially since I haven't been enjoying the "spirits" and not the Halloween kind either.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Now this is one I get. That memory foam has to be good for something. She may be a bit disappointed in her purchases, unfortunately. But the shoes will feel good.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
Now this is one I get. That memory foam has to be good for something. She may be a bit disappointed in her purchases, unfortunately. But the shoes will feel good.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Oh how I wish these shoes came in my size... I would buy every pair I could get my hands on. It's starting to get scary at times when I don't remember what I did or was about to do.... especially since I haven't been enjoying the "spirits" and not the Halloween kind either.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from DonandVicki
A funny short flash story with a humorous point. I forget going from one room to the next. Well written and a twist at the end. You pulled this flash off with a flair.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
A funny short flash story with a humorous point. I forget going from one room to the next. Well written and a twist at the end. You pulled this flash off with a flair.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Oh how I wish these shoes came in my size... I would buy every pair I could get my hands on. It's starting to get scary at times when I don't remember what I did or was about to do.... especially since I haven't been enjoying the "spirits" and not the Halloween kind either.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Julie Helms
OHHH, is that how it works! Haha. I could definitely use a pair in every room, too. This is an adorable flash fiction with a funny play on words. It's also readily relatable to the 50+ crowd. Nice job!
Julie
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
OHHH, is that how it works! Haha. I could definitely use a pair in every room, too. This is an adorable flash fiction with a funny play on words. It's also readily relatable to the 50+ crowd. Nice job!
Julie
:-)
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Oh how I wish these shoes came in my size... I would buy every pair I could get my hands on. It's starting to get scary at times when I don't remember what I did or was about to do.... especially since I haven't been enjoying the "spirits" and not the Halloween kind either.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Hi Carol. This is a cute poem. The ending surprises me. It was clever. The picture goes well with your words. Very good writing.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
Hi Carol. This is a cute poem. The ending surprises me. It was clever. The picture goes well with your words. Very good writing.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Oh how I wish these shoes came in my size... I would buy every pair I could get my hands on. It's starting to get scary at times when I don't remember what I did or was about to do.... especially since I haven't been enjoying the "spirits" and not the Halloween kind either.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. This would have been good for the Dialogue Only contest. Oh, if only memory worked like that right from the feet. And it's true, once you get into another room, you forget what you came there for!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
Lol. This would have been good for the Dialogue Only contest. Oh, if only memory worked like that right from the feet. And it's true, once you get into another room, you forget what you came there for!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Oh how I wish these shoes came in my size... I would buy every pair I could get my hands on. It's starting to get scary at times when I don't remember what I did or was about to do.... especially since I haven't been enjoying the "spirits" and not the Halloween kind either.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. Oh well - let's hope you weren't disappointed with all your new shoes. A fun write.Just goes to show that we can all be very literal at times. Thanks for sharing.
Wendy
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
Lol. Oh well - let's hope you weren't disappointed with all your new shoes. A fun write.Just goes to show that we can all be very literal at times. Thanks for sharing.
Wendy
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2024
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Oh how I wish these shoes came in my size... I would buy every pair I could get my hands on. It's starting to get scary at times when I don't remember what I did or was about to do.... especially since I haven't been enjoying the "spirits" and not the Halloween kind either.
Smiles and hugs, Carol