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The sands of time change18 total reviews
Comment from zanya
Love that sub heading -'The sands of time change' and do we ever really know what Fate has in store for us - an interesting setting 'time travelling chambers' well done
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Love that sub heading -'The sands of time change' and do we ever really know what Fate has in store for us - an interesting setting 'time travelling chambers' well done
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
This is an interesting premise that two people who do not know each other enter their one-hour trip into time. Interestingly enough, they become intertwined. That's an interesting story concept. I did enjoy the read.
Robert
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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This is an interesting premise that two people who do not know each other enter their one-hour trip into time. Interestingly enough, they become intertwined. That's an interesting story concept. I did enjoy the read.
Robert
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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When its fiction you can imagine anything and make it come true. LOL It would be nice to be able to travel back and visit someone for an hour though. Thank you so much for the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
I've always been a sucker with anything about time travel or warps, always imagining growing up that it might be possible. I mean, who knows, right?
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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I've always been a sucker with anything about time travel or warps, always imagining growing up that it might be possible. I mean, who knows, right?
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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I don't that it will happen in my life time but I think it would be awesome to return in time to see someone you can't see now. Or to change the what ifs.....to zig when you should have zagged. Thanks so much for being so generous.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Sounds like you know me well, my zig-zagger has always been broke.:-)
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Smiles and hugs!
Comment from Wendy G
A clever story, Carol. An imaginative way for a couple to meet - and it sounds like it was meant to be. Time travel? Meeting again when both need a cab? Absolutely, it sounds like a "meant to be". Well writen, of course.
Wendy
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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A clever story, Carol. An imaginative way for a couple to meet - and it sounds like it was meant to be. Time travel? Meeting again when both need a cab? Absolutely, it sounds like a "meant to be". Well writen, of course.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Guess I went a little futuristic or stretched the imagination, but it was a fun way to write a love story. Thanks for enjoying it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
So original! This story is screaming to be published, Carol...
Ten thousand possibilities within the text...fate will persist, should we not heed it the first time!
Oh, my.
Love this!
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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So original! This story is screaming to be published, Carol...
Ten thousand possibilities within the text...fate will persist, should we not heed it the first time!
Oh, my.
Love this!
Karenina
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Yes, I too can imagine how many different ways this story could go and how the endings would play out so differently - some happy and some not so happy, but always leaving us with the thought of "should things be left in the past" or can we search out the "What ifs?"
Smiles, Carol
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Hmmm. Years (decades!) ago, I had a brief moment of indecision and walked away. I think many of who are happy with our lives, still have moments when we wonder, "What if I signed when I should have zagged?" You tapped into that, for me!
Comment from Douglas Goff
How very creative, my friend! A time traveling love story!
I enjoyed your characters immensely! They were realistic in an unrealistic environment.
Good job!
D
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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How very creative, my friend! A time traveling love story!
I enjoyed your characters immensely! They were realistic in an unrealistic environment.
Good job!
D
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much, Doug. I so appreciate your thoughts and the wonderful stars. As always, you are so generous and kind.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from DonandVicki
A futuristic flash fiction with a twist. I like the fact that in your story that fate still rules. Actually, God is in charge and no matter how much we want to go back to the past, you cannot go home. God rules the future as well as the past.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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A futuristic flash fiction with a twist. I like the fact that in your story that fate still rules. Actually, God is in charge and no matter how much we want to go back to the past, you cannot go home. God rules the future as well as the past.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Yes, He does and the roadway is already paved and we just don't always know it. But it was fun to play with the idea of what technology (which can be dangerous as well as helpful) could possibly do.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a great little story, a perfect romance. Have you ever read Women's World on the supermarket newsstands. They buy stories like this, their info is in the mag and on the internet, and they pay really well. The word length is the hardest problem for this magazine for me.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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This is a great little story, a perfect romance. Have you ever read Women's World on the supermarket newsstands. They buy stories like this, their info is in the mag and on the internet, and they pay really well. The word length is the hardest problem for this magazine for me.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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I'll have to check it out. I believe I have seen the magazine near the checkouts but I've not read it. Thanks for enjoying this one.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
I can see you have a sense of destiny, that somethings are simply meant to be, and I agree with you Carol, I know that if your life is tied up with God properly that can certainly happen, but I know my life with Elaine was meant to be, and yours with your husband, well done Carol, great story, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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I can see you have a sense of destiny, that somethings are simply meant to be, and I agree with you Carol, I know that if your life is tied up with God properly that can certainly happen, but I know my life with Elaine was meant to be, and yours with your husband, well done Carol, great story, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Yes, I believe that regardless what difficult roads I traveled in life, I was meant to be with Mike. We fell in love and when no one else was there to care for him during his illness, I fought the doctors and everyone to make sure his life was the best it could be until the end. Others say they couldn't have done it but I don't regret a moment of it. I am glad that you too have found that kind of love with Elaine.
Smiles, Carol
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I completely understand, love is much much more than people think, well done
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Have a great day!
Comment from Carol Clark2
An interesting concept, to go back in time for one hour. You might split the last sentence of paragraph 5 into two sentences, the first with a question mark, and the second with a period. You write with great descriptions. Hugs! Carol
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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An interesting concept, to go back in time for one hour. You might split the last sentence of paragraph 5 into two sentences, the first with a question mark, and the second with a period. You write with great descriptions. Hugs! Carol
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Thanks Carol. I will take a look at your suggestion and see if I can change it. Appreciate the review and your comments.
smiles, Carol
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Sorry, sometimes the internal editor doesn't quit.