Angry American
How an American feels about the country right now26 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
Amen! You, my friend, are among millions who are pissed-off Americans. Enough is enough. The division has to stop or we will fall. Corruption has it's hands around the American's throats. Praying this nation doesn't fall.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Amen! You, my friend, are among millions who are pissed-off Americans. Enough is enough. The division has to stop or we will fall. Corruption has it's hands around the American's throats. Praying this nation doesn't fall.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Hi Steve,
Thank you for the review. I agree with you. This election is going to be interesting. Please pray, because we need God right now.
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I will. God needs to be in everything.
Comment from karenina
Welcome to FanStory! This is the place to open up and let your passionate views flow!
I don't know many who think we're in a good place as we close in on two weeks before the election.
We're all screaming "enough" and being spoon fed sound bites.
Our divided nation must heal.
More please!
Karenina
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Welcome to FanStory! This is the place to open up and let your passionate views flow!
I don't know many who think we're in a good place as we close in on two weeks before the election.
We're all screaming "enough" and being spoon fed sound bites.
Our divided nation must heal.
More please!
Karenina
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Hi Karenina,
Thank you for the kind review. I hope this election doesn't turn into a shit show. This election will be very interesting. I will keep them coming. I write from the heart.
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Writing without passion is like painting a portrait with a brush dipped in water...
Forms or free verse, alliteration or dissonance, simile or metaphor.
Each of these will emerge from a pen plied with passion!
Someone told me when I joined FS in 2007 that the best way to write...
Is to write!
:)
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Love it!
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Unpack and settle in.
You're in the "write" place!!!!
:)
Comment from Jacob1395
I think these feelings can be felt around the world, it is so hard to see sometimes what the world has become like in recent years. A well written piece, Cecilia, I could feel the emotion in your writing as I was reading it.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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I think these feelings can be felt around the world, it is so hard to see sometimes what the world has become like in recent years. A well written piece, Cecilia, I could feel the emotion in your writing as I was reading it.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Hi Jacob,
Thank you for your kind review. Yes, there is a lot of emotion and that's when my best work happens. This world is a hot mess and it scares me.
Comment from royowen
I think you've answered the question in the last verse Cecilia, your nation has drifted away fine God, and that is always the answer, also a relationship and diplomatic relations with Israel is essential to that end, beautifully written My friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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I think you've answered the question in the last verse Cecilia, your nation has drifted away fine God, and that is always the answer, also a relationship and diplomatic relations with Israel is essential to that end, beautifully written My friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Hi Roy,
Yes, my country is a hot mess and every other country is affected by it. Jesus needs to come soon,
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You're absolute right
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Welcome to FS. One of the first things a writer needs is passion. You certainly have shown that you are filled with passion about the subject you have chosen. Many share your concerns.
America has changed a lot since 9/11, Adding the pandemic to that. made even greater changes.
All Christians should be praying for our country and inviting God back into our society.
This is well written with passion, And I wish you the best. Enjoy yourself and KEEP writing.
Robert.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Welcome to FS. One of the first things a writer needs is passion. You certainly have shown that you are filled with passion about the subject you have chosen. Many share your concerns.
America has changed a lot since 9/11, Adding the pandemic to that. made even greater changes.
All Christians should be praying for our country and inviting God back into our society.
This is well written with passion, And I wish you the best. Enjoy yourself and KEEP writing.
Robert.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Robert,
Thank you again for the kind review. The state of the country scares me. I can see where it's headed and there are so many people who are clueless.
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You're welcome.
Comment from judiverse
I hear you, and I think millions of people will express the same feelings you have when they vote on election day. I don't how some people can express joy when the problems you describe are very real. The division in the country is terrible, and I fear it will get worse, no matter who is elected. I agree, the White House has been blind to problems of inflation, crime, migrants, etc. The people didn't have a real say in determining who their candidate for president. The Democratic nominee was anointed without having to go through the process of winning state contests. Oh, well, enough of that. Very well expressed. Congratulations on your first post, new member. I'd suggest adding more info to your biography and making use of artwork to enhance your writing. FanArtReview has great artists, or you can select from internet. judi
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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I hear you, and I think millions of people will express the same feelings you have when they vote on election day. I don't how some people can express joy when the problems you describe are very real. The division in the country is terrible, and I fear it will get worse, no matter who is elected. I agree, the White House has been blind to problems of inflation, crime, migrants, etc. The people didn't have a real say in determining who their candidate for president. The Democratic nominee was anointed without having to go through the process of winning state contests. Oh, well, enough of that. Very well expressed. Congratulations on your first post, new member. I'd suggest adding more info to your biography and making use of artwork to enhance your writing. FanArtReview has great artists, or you can select from internet. judi
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Hi Judi,
Thank you for the kind review. I am still trying to navigate this forum, but I will add more to my profile as suggested and start playing with the art work. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated.
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You're very welcome. You might also want to check out some of the clubs. Just look under clubs and you'll several listed. It doesn't cost anything to be a member of one, and they offer a lot of good suggestions for writing. judi
Comment from Nicki.B
Firstly well done on your first milestone post! It's great, welcome to Fan Story.
This poem really expresses the anger and the frustration around how all the heroic veterans are being treated I'm your country, that's very sad state if affairs, well done for getting the message out there.
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Firstly well done on your first milestone post! It's great, welcome to Fan Story.
This poem really expresses the anger and the frustration around how all the heroic veterans are being treated I'm your country, that's very sad state if affairs, well done for getting the message out there.
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Hi Nicki,
Thank you. Everything inn this country trickles down to the the other countries. The U.S. is struggling and I know other countries are as well. Somebody needs to say "Enough" It will take a lot of people and not just one.
Comment from Barry Penfold
Welcome to fanstory and a powerful poem to start. Many are concerned with the state of the nation. Even those who do not live there. I hope your cry for help brings a savior. Keep writing as it seems you are good at it.
Take care.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Welcome to fanstory and a powerful poem to start. Many are concerned with the state of the nation. Even those who do not live there. I hope your cry for help brings a savior. Keep writing as it seems you are good at it.
Take care.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Hi Barry,
Thank you for your kind review. This nation is in trouble and it makes my heart sad. I sometimes think I'm good, but then the doubt sneaks in. This forum sure has boosted my confidence. I write from the heart. It's how I express my feelings and helps keep me balanced.
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Keep writing and let that confidence soar. Cheers
Comment from ESOSTINE
Your poem clearly captures the current mood of most people in the United State of America and beyond. We pray and hope that God's position is restored back in the States, with all the trust placed on Him. Consider reviewing the line 6, veterans without possessive. Well done, dear Cecilia. You captured the mood of the good people of the world, not only America.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Your poem clearly captures the current mood of most people in the United State of America and beyond. We pray and hope that God's position is restored back in the States, with all the trust placed on Him. Consider reviewing the line 6, veterans without possessive. Well done, dear Cecilia. You captured the mood of the good people of the world, not only America.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Thank you again for your kind review. I will take your suggestion under advisement. I know a lot of people who think the same, however, they are afraid to speak it. I am a rebel and will say it just because I can.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading this poem. You are so true. I'm waiting for Jesus to come back too. I can't even watch the news anymore. It is so depressing. Well written. Great job.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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I enjoyed reading this poem. You are so true. I'm waiting for Jesus to come back too. I can't even watch the news anymore. It is so depressing. Well written. Great job.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Hi Brenda,
Thank you for your review. Yes, the news is depressing and that's why I just don't have any kind cable. I get my news through my husband, which isn't very often. Jesus is coming soon, but just not soon enough.