Merciful God
A poem of faith.27 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
I like the mention of the prodigal son, it speaks to the reader. Your words bring forth a feeling of faith. "Pull me from this quicksand" is a perfect line that creates a vivid image. Excellent poetic form and use of words.
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I like the mention of the prodigal son, it speaks to the reader. Your words bring forth a feeling of faith. "Pull me from this quicksand" is a perfect line that creates a vivid image. Excellent poetic form and use of words.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am so grateful that God grants grace over those who ask and believe in Him. Thank you for sharing this very well written contest entry. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you luck with the contest.
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I am so grateful that God grants grace over those who ask and believe in Him. Thank you for sharing this very well written contest entry. I enjoyed reading and want to wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
Comment from Neonewman
This is a beautifully crafted piece you have entered for this My Faith contest. Only he can forgive our sins through Jesus Christ. I thank him every day.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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This is a beautifully crafted piece you have entered for this My Faith contest. Only he can forgive our sins through Jesus Christ. I thank him every day.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Thank youi Steve for your kind review.
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My pleasure.
Comment from karenina
In a world where excuses or blaming others seems to be a circumventing of taking ownership of our sins, this poem of repentance is inspired by the light of our Lord!
Karenina
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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In a world where excuses or blaming others seems to be a circumventing of taking ownership of our sins, this poem of repentance is inspired by the light of our Lord!
Karenina
Comment Written 22-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
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Thank you Karenina for your thoughtful review. Don
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You are welcome...
Comment from Boogienights
This is a very heartfelt prayer to God, a promise to give your heart and soul to him. It's a beautiful expression of faith, one that will be heard by Him. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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This is a very heartfelt prayer to God, a promise to give your heart and soul to him. It's a beautiful expression of faith, one that will be heard by Him. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Thsank you so much BOOGIE.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is very dramatically illustrated and expressed. Your plea for forgiveness and redemption is impressively conveyed in your rhyming verse and will, I'm sure, be a strong contender in the contest. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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This is very dramatically illustrated and expressed. Your plea for forgiveness and redemption is impressively conveyed in your rhyming verse and will, I'm sure, be a strong contender in the contest. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much Debbie.
Comment from royowen
I love the sheer humility of your post, I think this is the only way to approach the Lord to do it humble abeyance to His holy goodness and mercy, He can't abide the pride that seems to pour from mankind, with a sense of entitlement that humans have these days, beautifully written, great work D&V, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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I love the sheer humility of your post, I think this is the only way to approach the Lord to do it humble abeyance to His holy goodness and mercy, He can't abide the pride that seems to pour from mankind, with a sense of entitlement that humans have these days, beautifully written, great work D&V, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much Roy, you are very kind.
Comment from June Sargent
When we feel we are mired in the quicksand of fear and doubt, we need to reach out to our loving Creator for help. He knows our weaknesses and can lift us out of whatever situation we're stuck in to be free again. We just need to believe that He is there.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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When we feel we are mired in the quicksand of fear and doubt, we need to reach out to our loving Creator for help. He knows our weaknesses and can lift us out of whatever situation we're stuck in to be free again. We just need to believe that He is there.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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You are very kind.
Comment from Jacob1395
This is a very spiritual piece and I could feel your trust in God as I was reading it which really comes through in your writing as you ask for forgiveness. A Well written piece. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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This is a very spiritual piece and I could feel your trust in God as I was reading it which really comes through in your writing as you ask for forgiveness. A Well written piece. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Thank you Jacob.
Comment from Nicki.B
What a beautiful poem of faith, the perfect entry for the prompt, a prayer of forgiveness which we can all do with! Best of luck with the contest, well done
Best Wishes
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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What a beautiful poem of faith, the perfect entry for the prompt, a prayer of forgiveness which we can all do with! Best of luck with the contest, well done
Best Wishes
Comment Written 21-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your generous review.