Mid-Summer's Dream
A 50 Word Flash19 total reviews
Comment from bob cullen
That was some dream. Love the print you've used in this post. It looks so good. Just one suggestion to the poet. Change your choice of drinks, before you go to bed tomorrow.
That was some dream. Love the print you've used in this post. It looks so good. Just one suggestion to the poet. Change your choice of drinks, before you go to bed tomorrow.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This seems like such a terrible fate is about to befall her and suddenly humor intrudes. Very well told 50-word flash. The picture seems to tell a tale of someone lying down drowsing.
This seems like such a terrible fate is about to befall her and suddenly humor intrudes. Very well told 50-word flash. The picture seems to tell a tale of someone lying down drowsing.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from Douglas Goff
Damn this dams will get you every time! (Yep. I know. I took the east road).
This is exquisitely written and equally so displayed with the flourishing font!
Good job!
D
Damn this dams will get you every time! (Yep. I know. I took the east road).
This is exquisitely written and equally so displayed with the flourishing font!
Good job!
D
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Carol,
This is a great 50 word flash! I wasn't sure where you were going until the end. I'm terrified of water that's too deep in which to swim, so ...
Excellent entry, Carol.
Good luck in the contest!
Cindy
Carol,
This is a great 50 word flash! I wasn't sure where you were going until the end. I'm terrified of water that's too deep in which to swim, so ...
Excellent entry, Carol.
Good luck in the contest!
Cindy
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from patcelaw
Being in your bed when the boat is going over, there falls are over. The damn is a very good place to be as long as you don't dream of getting all wet and then find out that it wasn't the water. It was something else. Lol.
Being in your bed when the boat is going over, there falls are over. The damn is a very good place to be as long as you don't dream of getting all wet and then find out that it wasn't the water. It was something else. Lol.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
That is a nightmare. The description makes the dream easy to visualize for the reader. It is a good thing you woke up. You Could have gotten very wet. The story is well narrated with the surprise ending.
Robert
That is a nightmare. The description makes the dream easy to visualize for the reader. It is a good thing you woke up. You Could have gotten very wet. The story is well narrated with the surprise ending.
Robert
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from Pam (respa)
Beautiful image, Carol, and story to go with it. A very good opening hook. The progression of events is also very good. You are enjoying this peaceful ride with "sweet memories." Eventually, the boat came close to the dam. You have a very good twist at the end. A very good entry I enjoyed reading. Good luck in the contest. Did you catch yourself screaming out loud? I used to do that. I would rather be on a blissful boat!
Beautiful image, Carol, and story to go with it. A very good opening hook. The progression of events is also very good. You are enjoying this peaceful ride with "sweet memories." Eventually, the boat came close to the dam. You have a very good twist at the end. A very good entry I enjoyed reading. Good luck in the contest. Did you catch yourself screaming out loud? I used to do that. I would rather be on a blissful boat!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from royowen
Yes, I wonder how many have had that dream Carol, I've had that dream, or rather something similar but I actually fell out of bed, but I wasn't hurt, heh heh. You are certainly on a roll now, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Yes, I wonder how many have had that dream Carol, I've had that dream, or rather something similar but I actually fell out of bed, but I wasn't hurt, heh heh. You are certainly on a roll now, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Some of those dreams can be scary, for sure. Thank you for sharing this short write with us. I enjoyed reading. This short story is very well written.
Some of those dreams can be scary, for sure. Thank you for sharing this short write with us. I enjoyed reading. This short story is very well written.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I have such vivid dreams... nearly nightmares sometimes. Falling in the abyss is the worst. I recall hearing that if you don't awaken before hitting bottom you will die.
Nicely written. Good work.
I have such vivid dreams... nearly nightmares sometimes. Falling in the abyss is the worst. I recall hearing that if you don't awaken before hitting bottom you will die.
Nicely written. Good work.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024