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A graceful dancer

Granddaughter Indah's 13th birthday.

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Comment from Carol Clark2
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Your granddaughter is beautiful! And that's a lovely trophy she's holding. Congrats to Indah! Your poem is a nice blessing for her, and you used good rhymes throughout. I'm sure she is also proud of her Bapa. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024

Comment from Samantha Wymer
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Firstly, I like to wish your daughter a happy birthday and many more. The poem dedicated to your granddaughter is beautiful and sounds like God gave her a talent of dancing. We should always sing and dance in rejoice to our Lord. Beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Awww, Roy, this poem brought tears to my eyes. What a beautiful poem for a beautiful young lady. I see she's inherited the family gift for song and dance. She's a lovely child of God and her Bapa's pride and joy.

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024

Comment from Barry Penfold
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Top notch effort in this one Roy. Actually brings memories to me about my granddaughter who loves dancing. Her mum dances with her as well. So lovely to watch. We are both blessed. Have a great day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024

Comment from Kahlani
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Hi Roy, Your granddaughter is lucky to have a grandpa who writes poetry for her. I notice she's talented in the arts--just like you. It must run in the family. You have penned another beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024

Comment from Nicki.B
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Ah! this is a stunning tribute birthday poem for your beautiful granddaughter!

Happy birthday Indah, enjoy the celebrations! Your costume and pose is amazing you look so professional and congratulations on your win, what a trophy!

I can feel the love you hold dearly for her and how you are bursting with pride!
Best Wishes
Nicki

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024

Comment from RJ Heritage
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Beautiful and endearing words for an elegant young lady. I pray that tomorrow is spent in joyfulness and blessings. Thanks for sharing. Today is my stepdaughter's birthday.
RJ

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024

Comment from Begin Again
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Wishing Indah a very Happy 13th Birthday. .. officially a teenager and one blessed by God with a beautiful talent. She's gorgeous and I hope life treats her well and she does the same. Beautiful poem and dedication to your granddaughter, Roy.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024

Comment from Aussie
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Indah (what a beautiful name) does it have a meaning?
I loved your poem and the photo was spectacular. Grandchildren grow quickly. A talented dancer at 18, she sure has a future dancing for the Lord. K xx

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
    Yes Kay, Indah in Indonesia means beautiful, and she is, she gave life the Lord last year, the pastor prophesied at her baptism, her Heavenly name is Warrior princess, and God told me she is a bridge between nations. Thank you for this wonderful review, blessings Roy ,
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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First line: change "loved your" to "loved you"

A lovely tribute to your love granddaughter, Roy. She looks so confident and graceful in this picture, and I'm sure her confidence flows beyond the stage.

Thank you for sharing her birthday with us again this year.

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2024