2024 Gypsy's Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "~ * ~ Weeping Willow ~ * ~".
5 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oooohhhh, these kinds of stories always give me just a bit of the chills... and makes me worry more about some of the young ones I see come into the store occasionally. A great offering for the contest, Gypsy, and a good light to shine on those suicide 'helps' in your notes... Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Oooohhhh, these kinds of stories always give me just a bit of the chills... and makes me worry more about some of the young ones I see come into the store occasionally. A great offering for the contest, Gypsy, and a good light to shine on those suicide 'helps' in your notes... Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 Yvette
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Okay, this contest entry was definitely creepy. Again, Dean would be so proud of you. I enjoyed reading. You did a wonderful job with this contest entry. I'm sure it will rate high. Just in case, good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Okay, this contest entry was definitely creepy. Again, Dean would be so proud of you. I enjoyed reading. You did a wonderful job with this contest entry. I'm sure it will rate high. Just in case, good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
Well, wel. This was a surprising twist at the end and a nicely written creepy post. Your forte is Gothic and dark. You don't over dramatize and you lead one way only to pull the rug out from under the reader. To someone who enjoys spooky, that is a compliment. I really enjoyed this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Well, wel. This was a surprising twist at the end and a nicely written creepy post. Your forte is Gothic and dark. You don't over dramatize and you lead one way only to pull the rug out from under the reader. To someone who enjoys spooky, that is a compliment. I really enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Gretchen. I should had waited a few days to post but I'm too impatient. I just read it and found inconsistencies. It's bed time but tomorrow I will work on it.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
Inside was a Quija Planchette. -- typo - "ouija"
well, i didn't see that ending coming!
great surprise twist!
very cool story - interesting and intriguing and kept me reading to see what happened next
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Inside was a Quija Planchette. -- typo - "ouija"
well, i didn't see that ending coming!
great surprise twist!
very cool story - interesting and intriguing and kept me reading to see what happened next
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!
shelley :)
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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I always thought it was Quija... thanks!
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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it's 'yes' in french (oui) and german (ja)
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Oh, that makes sense
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Wow, Gypsy, I wasn't expecting this length. Quite a magnum opus here which I enjoyed reading. In fact it was expressed with such passion and credibility that I believed for a moment it was non-fiction. The build up of fear is very real and I could imagine the dread and insecurity you felt. One edit: I was the outsider who never fit(ted) in (I might just have given you the British English version). All beautifully presented and a strong contender. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Wow, Gypsy, I wasn't expecting this length. Quite a magnum opus here which I enjoyed reading. In fact it was expressed with such passion and credibility that I believed for a moment it was non-fiction. The build up of fear is very real and I could imagine the dread and insecurity you felt. One edit: I was the outsider who never fit(ted) in (I might just have given you the British English version). All beautifully presented and a strong contender. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Debbie. I always appreciate help with grammar. English is My second language. 😊
Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy