Patch and Ruby
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Patch and Ruby Plan a BD Party"Patch is Helen's cat and Ruby is Kenzie's cat
47 total reviews
Comment from NanaGaye
What a fun poem and what a play with words and as for the picture a wonderful choice, I can hear those naughty cats singing and laughing. Really great to read a fanciful poem put a smile on peoples faces.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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What a fun poem and what a play with words and as for the picture a wonderful choice, I can hear those naughty cats singing and laughing. Really great to read a fanciful poem put a smile on peoples faces.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
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Hello my sweet Gaye, and thank you for this beautiful review for Patch and Ruby. Thanks for the six stars and such sweet comments. You are so appreciated, my very dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a fun story, even if they are trying to put one over on Patch's wife. It was a fun party that Catzilla kept on a pleasant note by kicking out drunks. The Missus didn't mind the party as she watched with her camera.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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This is a fun story, even if they are trying to put one over on Patch's wife. It was a fun party that Catzilla kept on a pleasant note by kicking out drunks. The Missus didn't mind the party as she watched with her camera.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much, Carol. I appreciate your kind comments. Yes, this is the fourth poem in the book of Patch and Ruby and hopefully I will make a real book when I get more written.
Thanks again, my sweet friend. Love and hugs!! Debi
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Haha. This is the funniest birthday poem I have ever read for a while because it's for a cat, Patch, our Helen's cat. Even though they were naughty, Helen liked it. They were allowed to be a little of normal for his birthday.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Haha. This is the funniest birthday poem I have ever read for a while because it's for a cat, Patch, our Helen's cat. Even though they were naughty, Helen liked it. They were allowed to be a little of normal for his birthday.
Excellent.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Hi Lisa, thank you for the most delightful comments for my silly cat poem. Also I want to thank you for the lovely six stars. This is the fourth one in my book and I am hoping to write enough for a children's book. However, then the alcohol lines will have to be changed. LOL. Thanks again my sweet friend. I appreciate it so much. You gave me the biggest smile.
Love, Debi
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Yes. This will make a great children's book. The illustration is also very colorful and fun. Good luck.
Comment from cupa tea
That's a really cute poem. I like the build up as it goes alone without them knowing they were being recorded. Good job. If it's for a contest good luck!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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That's a really cute poem. I like the build up as it goes alone without them knowing they were being recorded. Good job. If it's for a contest good luck!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Hi cupa tea, I thank you for the most delightful comments for my silly cat poem. This is the fourth one in my book and I am hoping to write enough for a children's book. However, then the alcohol lines will have to be changed. LOL. Thanks again my sweet friend. I appreciate it so much. You gave me the biggest smile.
Love, Debi
Comment from LJbutterfly
Since I live in Florida, I've been lost for a week in the effects of Hurricane Milton. I'm am back now and greeted by this delightful story poem about Patch, who I already knew, and her cat friends I am just meeting. This is going to be fun, reading about cat antics. I'm looking forward to the mischief they are all about to get into.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Since I live in Florida, I've been lost for a week in the effects of Hurricane Milton. I'm am back now and greeted by this delightful story poem about Patch, who I already knew, and her cat friends I am just meeting. This is going to be fun, reading about cat antics. I'm looking forward to the mischief they are all about to get into.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Hi Lorraine, I just sent a link to your email for the poem I wrote called
Pray for Florida. You are now listed in the authors notes as one to pray for.
I am not sending this to you to review but I feel so bad that I wasn't thinking at first about you living there. However you were included by just living there.
There were prayers all over for everyone in Florida and the other nearby states. Especially North Carolina. So I am so happy you are back. Did you have any severe damage or injuries in your family.
I am glad these little kitties made you smile. If you look on top of the page there are four poems in the book written for Patch and Ruby. Remember Ruby is my granddaughter, Kenzie's cat.
Thanks so much for the kind comments, sweetie. It is so good to see you. Make sure to check your email. Love ya lots. Let me know how you are doing. Love, Debi
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I love some of the words- meowgaritas and intoxicats - in this very intoxi-cat-ing party between skype friends. Love the artwork of these partying felines. Good fun all round Debi.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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I love some of the words- meowgaritas and intoxicats - in this very intoxi-cat-ing party between skype friends. Love the artwork of these partying felines. Good fun all round Debi.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Hi Valda, and I love that you liked my fourth story about Patch and Ruby. I am hoping that eventually it will become a real book for children. However I will have to change the alcohol lines then. LOL. Thanks for the sweet comments and for the generous six stars.
Thanks again, my sweet friend. Lotsa love and hugs. Debi
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
And in the basement, all these cats
Were dancing in fun party hats
That sounds really adorable for a child's rhyming song, for children who love cats,
Or even for baby rhyme,
Many thanks for such a cute song lyrics style poetry,
best wishes,
Sarah
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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And in the basement, all these cats
Were dancing in fun party hats
That sounds really adorable for a child's rhyming song, for children who love cats,
Or even for baby rhyme,
Many thanks for such a cute song lyrics style poetry,
best wishes,
Sarah
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
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Thanks so much, Sarah. I appreciate your kind comments. Yes, this is the fourth poem in the book of Patch and Ruby and hopefully I will make a real book when I get more written.
Thanks again, my sweet friend. Love and hugs!! Debi
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork and nice presentation, Debi.
-Thanks for the notes.
-The cats are out of the bag for this one.
-Very good details about the party planning,
and everyone was having fun.
-I particularly like the fifth verse,
and the concluding verse.
-Very well done, my friend.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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-Great artwork and nice presentation, Debi.
-Thanks for the notes.
-The cats are out of the bag for this one.
-Very good details about the party planning,
and everyone was having fun.
-I particularly like the fifth verse,
and the concluding verse.
-Very well done, my friend.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Hi Pam, I thank you for the most delightful comments for my silly cat poem. This is the fourth one in my book and I am hoping to write enough for a children's book. However, then the alcohol lines will have to be changed. LOL. Thanks again my sweet friend. I appreciate it so much. You gave me the biggest smile.
Love, Debi
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You are very welcome, Debi, and thanks for sharing in you reply. I am glad I gave you a smile.
Comment from Neonewman
meowgaritas
whisk-E Sour Puss
Catzilla
What a fun piece with brilliant word play, Debi. I enjoyed its entirety and it brightened my day.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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meowgaritas
whisk-E Sour Puss
Catzilla
What a fun piece with brilliant word play, Debi. I enjoyed its entirety and it brightened my day.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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thank you for the kind comments for my silly cat poem. This is the fourth one in my book and I am hoping to write enough for a children's book. However, then the alcohol lines will have to be changed. LOL. Thanks again my sweet friend. I appreciate it so much.
Love, Debi
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Lol! My pleasure, Debi.
Comment from Barry Penfold
A delightful birthday party romp. Clever rhyming and naming. Image is spot on. So, it is one meowgaritas for me and all my best wishes to you. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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A delightful birthday party romp. Clever rhyming and naming. Image is spot on. So, it is one meowgaritas for me and all my best wishes to you. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Hi Barry, I thank you for the most delightful comments for my silly cat poem. This is the fourth one in my book and I am hoping to write enough for a children's book. However, sorry then the alcohol lines will have to be changed. LOL. Thanks again my dear friend. I appreciate it so much. You gave me the biggest smile.
Love, Debi
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Smiling is always good. Have a good day/night. All the best in getting the children's book completed. I'm ok if you have to go to mocktails.