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Powerless

Without connection, there is no power.

7 total reviews 
Comment from Wendy G
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A beautiful poem with several examples to build your theme. We are to be dependent on our Lord Jesus and we are to let His power be ours for we are weak and without power. Well said.
Wendy

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Wendy for you thoughtful, excellent review.
Comment from Esther Brown
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Precious and oh so true. Without God we can do nothing. With Him, nothing is impossible. My heart, Christ's home. It is a daily struggle not to leave things on the alter with "sticky fingers". Esther

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Esther with a review with thoughtful, true words.
Comment from talented150
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Wow! I can tell you have written a lot of poetry, and am impressed that you have published 12 books of poetry. This poem was expertly written - flawless. I got the message clearly that if there is no power (or strings), the object cannot move or turn on. Then you compare it to God who takes control and you allow it. Excellent!

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
    Thank you so much for your very kind review.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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What a beautifully poem! The imagery you used really drew me in. The shift from the struggles of life to the realization of God's control is so wonderful. It gives the poem a hopeful tone. Keep up the fantastic work--your words have a way of resonating deeply!

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
    Thank you Michael for your wonderful encouraging review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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You always add your own imaginative and unique twist in your poetry about faith. This in particular is 'powered' with great imagery that gives your beautiful words resonance and sincerity. Your visual also enhances. Well done, Verna. Debbie

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
    Thank you for your kind, thoughtful review, Debbie.
Comment from patcelaw
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It is such a wonderful thing to know that we are in a handsome God and he is the one that gives us power to make it through day after day. He has given me a lot of strength in the last nine days since I had to go through the surgery and I'm so much better now and I'm home again and I'm able to walk more than I was because the heart is doing better.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
    From poems I read, I prayed for you. I'ma so glad God answered everyone's prayers. Thank you for this excellent review.
Comment from BethShelby
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Your poem says everything we need to know about staying connected to the God who is our power source. I always enjoy reading you poetry because it aways flow beautifully and has a good message.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 05-Oct-2024
    Thank you so much for this wonderful review.