2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 71 "~ The Long and Winding Road ~"*
8 total reviews
Comment from Katiemae1977
That Beatles song jumped into my head the second I saw the title of the poem. Now it will be stuck in my head for the next half hour...yikes! :)
This is a beautiful Tanka with good connection between lines. Very erotic in a classy way.
Thoroughly enjoyed it.
Luv&stuff
Katiemaedead
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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That Beatles song jumped into my head the second I saw the title of the poem. Now it will be stuck in my head for the next half hour...yikes! :)
This is a beautiful Tanka with good connection between lines. Very erotic in a classy way.
Thoroughly enjoyed it.
Luv&stuff
Katiemaedead
Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Katiemae. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Neonewman
This is another beautifully crafted piece, Gypsy. As always, your talent shines brightly throughout your fans. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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This is another beautifully crafted piece, Gypsy. As always, your talent shines brightly throughout your fans. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
You bring to mind that our memories are triggered not only by smells and sights and sounds but also by touch. And the touch and feeling the shape of the missing beloved still remains in the narrator's memory.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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You bring to mind that our memories are triggered not only by smells and sights and sounds but also by touch. And the touch and feeling the shape of the missing beloved still remains in the narrator's memory.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
❤️ ❤️
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Beautifully captivating tanka, Gypsy... love the 'vibes' of this one as we walk away from someone, sad but not empty-handed. Think, perhaps, that in your final line, a plural of 'memories' might convey a relationship more than one-night stand...? Lovely rhetorical imagery, as always! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Beautifully captivating tanka, Gypsy... love the 'vibes' of this one as we walk away from someone, sad but not empty-handed. Think, perhaps, that in your final line, a plural of 'memories' might convey a relationship more than one-night stand...? Lovely rhetorical imagery, as always! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Yvette
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Definitely one of my favorite songs by one of my favorite legendary. Love has a way of creating listing memories. Your words and presentation create the feeling of passionate Love. Thanks fir sharing
RJ
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Definitely one of my favorite songs by one of my favorite legendary. Love has a way of creating listing memories. Your words and presentation create the feeling of passionate Love. Thanks fir sharing
RJ
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
in the tip of my fingers
memory of us remain (These two lines are perfect!)
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us. I also enjoyed listening to the Beatles. It's been a while since I listened to them. Your presentation was perfect.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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in the tip of my fingers
memory of us remain (These two lines are perfect!)
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us. I also enjoyed listening to the Beatles. It's been a while since I listened to them. Your presentation was perfect.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
A fantastic song that, the Beatles were such a talents, from the city I was born in, living not far from where I was actually birthed by my mother, well done Gypsy, great post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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A fantastic song that, the Beatles were such a talents, from the city I was born in, living not far from where I was actually birthed by my mother, well done Gypsy, great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy
Gypsy 😊
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Most welcome
Comment from shelley kaye
cool tanka - nice response to the beatles song
love those last two lines!
in the tip of my fingers
memory of us remain
great descriptive imagery through and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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cool tanka - nice response to the beatles song
love those last two lines!
in the tip of my fingers
memory of us remain
great descriptive imagery through and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊