Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
I love the way you've captured love in this piece! The line about love being "a divine design that few can comprehend" was so powerful. It flows so well with each thought leading into the next. I appreciate how you invite us to think about our own experiences of love. This was a pleasure to read--thank you for sharing! And congrats on your first post!!! Welcome!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
Love is many things to you in your poem here and I enjoyed your interpretation of love here. I would suggest you organise your poem with each line under each other in a poetry style as this would make it easy to read, good luck with the contest and welcome to Fanstory, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024