Be Careful, Ladies!
Wolf in sheep*s clothing.3 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! Not only did you make me smile, but your rhyme and chosen line choice really serve to smoothly entertain!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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LOL!! Not only did you make me smile, but your rhyme and chosen line choice really serve to smoothly entertain!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Cheers.
Comment from jessizero
I absolutely loved the way you used rhyme in this poem. You also seem to have gotten your syllable counts right for the writing prompt. Your message was oh so true. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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I absolutely loved the way you used rhyme in this poem. You also seem to have gotten your syllable counts right for the writing prompt. Your message was oh so true. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Many thanks (from a shy guy).
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Actually, I have to take exception to this advice by virtue of the fact that I've been married to a "shy guy" for a quarter of a century now and couldn't love him more.
I'll take a shy guy over a peacock ANY day. Someone who doesn't need the spotlight or flirt with every girl who enters his orbit or issue out unreasonable conduct edicts is someone with whom longevity is a wonderful and attainable goal.
Still, you did a FABULOUS job with the prompt, and I feel like it's got Winner's Circle potential. Good luck!! xoxo
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Actually, I have to take exception to this advice by virtue of the fact that I've been married to a "shy guy" for a quarter of a century now and couldn't love him more.
I'll take a shy guy over a peacock ANY day. Someone who doesn't need the spotlight or flirt with every girl who enters his orbit or issue out unreasonable conduct edicts is someone with whom longevity is a wonderful and attainable goal.
Still, you did a FABULOUS job with the prompt, and I feel like it's got Winner's Circle potential. Good luck!! xoxo
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Super, Rachelle. Many thanks.