Comment from
Y. M. Roger
Fun little twist on the age-old legend here... And a good entry for the 5-7-5 vampiric contest -- thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :-)
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
Thanks so much for your review and good luck wishes Y. M. Roger!
Comment from
Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Vampire 5-7-5 writing prompt. This was unique and humorous with an exceptional satori line. Nicely done. thanks for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
Thanks so very much for your review and good luck wishes Marilyn!
Comment from
Ellen Frank Bayer
accomplishes the goal of being a little scary but also funny at the same time. Illustration perfectly fits the theme of the writing. Perfect for October and Halloween.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
Thanks so very much Ellen for your wonderful comments and super review!