Truckin
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Truckin, Ch 4"The left lane is for passing only
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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
He is searching for trouble. He is two steps away from wearing tin foil for a hat. I am sleeping a lot more these days. I hope you and yours are doing well. Good writing. Have a good week. Karen
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He is searching for trouble. He is two steps away from wearing tin foil for a hat. I am sleeping a lot more these days. I hope you and yours are doing well. Good writing. Have a good week. Karen
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
Clyde out trying to repay truckers with vengeance for the death of his wife, almost sounds like all the other incidents we are reading about in the papers and seeing on television every day. Angry people in an angry world.
LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Clyde out trying to repay truckers with vengeance for the death of his wife, almost sounds like all the other incidents we are reading about in the papers and seeing on television every day. Angry people in an angry world.
LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you. And add to Clyde's loss the road rage at inconsiderate truckers.
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I'm an equal opportunity hater these day. The inconsiderate truckers, and about everyone else on the highways. People have come to believe everything is about them and the heck with everyone else. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
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Absolutely right. With all out travelin', I've learned (stereotyped) drivers according to their state tags, as well as the make of their vehicle.
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ROFL! I agree.
Comment from jim vecchio
A very good continuation. Wish I had more stars. Your writing is realistic and draws us into the story and gives us an eye-witness feeling of the action. I will be there waiting to see what happens to Clyde next.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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A very good continuation. Wish I had more stars. Your writing is realistic and draws us into the story and gives us an eye-witness feeling of the action. I will be there waiting to see what happens to Clyde next.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much. I was afraid that there wasn't enough action.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This chapter is gripping! I was pulled in by Clyde's growing paranoia. I love the "Billy the Kid" approach! I like the little touches like his interaction with his daughter. That really makes him feel real. And exciting chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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This chapter is gripping! I was pulled in by Clyde's growing paranoia. I love the "Billy the Kid" approach! I like the little touches like his interaction with his daughter. That really makes him feel real. And exciting chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you very, very much! I was a bit concerned that this segment lacked enough excitement.