Father, Son and Holy Spirit
Acrostic11 total reviews
Comment from Kahlani
This is a heartwarming poem, indeed. Your magical words give us all a little bit of hope that there is a happy ever after. It brings about a feeling of peace. Thank you for sharing.
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This is a heartwarming poem, indeed. Your magical words give us all a little bit of hope that there is a happy ever after. It brings about a feeling of peace. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This poem beautifully shares your message of Faith. I love how you shared the image of the Holy Spirit as a peaceful dove. The message to trust in God's eternal love even in difficult times really is beautiful to read. The rhymes flow naturally. This is beautifully crafted. Lovely work!
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This poem beautifully shares your message of Faith. I love how you shared the image of the Holy Spirit as a peaceful dove. The message to trust in God's eternal love even in difficult times really is beautiful to read. The rhymes flow naturally. This is beautifully crafted. Lovely work!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2024
Comment from gansach
This is a wonderful Acrostic poem presenting a lovely message in praise of God the Father, the Son, and the Holy Spirit. Nice imagery and descriptive language, perfect rhyming. Well done!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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This is a wonderful Acrostic poem presenting a lovely message in praise of God the Father, the Son, and the Holy Spirit. Nice imagery and descriptive language, perfect rhyming. Well done!
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A deeply religious and moving poem full of faith and hope and I enjoyed the positivity in these words as your message is delivered with a spiritual heart, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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A deeply religious and moving poem full of faith and hope and I enjoyed the positivity in these words as your message is delivered with a spiritual heart, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from Ang Tang
Beautiful poem full of potential! It obviously comes from your heart and your passions shines through. All Id change is that it lacks what I call "flow." I had to go back and read certain lines twice to hear the rhyme and understand some stanzas. I always recommend reading your poem as if you're reciting it (even if it's just to yourself in your head) to make sure it has "flow." You'll know it when you hear it.
Here is my edited version:
Father, full of love, he is by my side
He listens each time that I pray
He's always with me to open my eyes
And inspire a positive day
To Him we owe the honor, the glory, and peace
How I rely on His holy presence, knowing it never will cease.
Eternal, His creation brings tears to my eyes;
It's beauty welcomes my soul.
Bursting with joy, His love all around;
I now know what it means to be whole
He sent us his precious son,
A savior, who tried to show us His ways
Despite this most selfless gift he did give,
God received only betrayal, not praise
But my God forgives, showing mercy and grace
Despite all this heartache and strife
Jesus paid for our sins, the ultimate gift;
Salvation and eternal life
A symbol of peace, let the delicate dove,
Remind us to all read His word
When love is strong and guidance is sought,
All fears fly away like a bird
Seek the Holy Spirit's enduring light
In it, hope cannot be lost.
It will guide the way, and keep you safe
Even on dark scary nights.
Only He can soften the hearts made of stone.
Hearts are meant to be open.
Let down your guard, his light will shine through
He'll make whole all of those who feel broken.
Invite Him in and you'll see, he love you so much
Life can begin again, a fresh start
Heavenly Father is waiting for you
Just allow him to come into your heart
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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Beautiful poem full of potential! It obviously comes from your heart and your passions shines through. All Id change is that it lacks what I call "flow." I had to go back and read certain lines twice to hear the rhyme and understand some stanzas. I always recommend reading your poem as if you're reciting it (even if it's just to yourself in your head) to make sure it has "flow." You'll know it when you hear it.
Here is my edited version:
Father, full of love, he is by my side
He listens each time that I pray
He's always with me to open my eyes
And inspire a positive day
To Him we owe the honor, the glory, and peace
How I rely on His holy presence, knowing it never will cease.
Eternal, His creation brings tears to my eyes;
It's beauty welcomes my soul.
Bursting with joy, His love all around;
I now know what it means to be whole
He sent us his precious son,
A savior, who tried to show us His ways
Despite this most selfless gift he did give,
God received only betrayal, not praise
But my God forgives, showing mercy and grace
Despite all this heartache and strife
Jesus paid for our sins, the ultimate gift;
Salvation and eternal life
A symbol of peace, let the delicate dove,
Remind us to all read His word
When love is strong and guidance is sought,
All fears fly away like a bird
Seek the Holy Spirit's enduring light
In it, hope cannot be lost.
It will guide the way, and keep you safe
Even on dark scary nights.
Only He can soften the hearts made of stone.
Hearts are meant to be open.
Let down your guard, his light will shine through
He'll make whole all of those who feel broken.
Invite Him in and you'll see, he love you so much
Life can begin again, a fresh start
Heavenly Father is waiting for you
Just allow him to come into your heart
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2024
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Thank you for taking time to read and review. Elaine
Comment from jessizero
This was a beautiful and uplifting acrostic. I like how each stanza described a different aspect of God. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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This was a beautiful and uplifting acrostic. I like how each stanza described a different aspect of God. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from lancellot
This is very well written and has a good message, for those religious inclined and it also works to those not so much. I don't read much spiritual work, but I know good poetry when I read it. Good work.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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This is very well written and has a good message, for those religious inclined and it also works to those not so much. I don't read much spiritual work, but I know good poetry when I read it. Good work.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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I am honored by your taking time to read my poem. Thank you for your encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Elaine,
Your beautiful praise of the Holy Spirit is so comforting. The Great Comforter is the soul of God; when I pray I feel His love and guidance. I know He's real.
A wonderful, uplifting poem, Elaine.
Best wishes!
Blessings,
Cindy
I really needed this poem today.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Elaine,
Your beautiful praise of the Holy Spirit is so comforting. The Great Comforter is the soul of God; when I pray I feel His love and guidance. I know He's real.
A wonderful, uplifting poem, Elaine.
Best wishes!
Blessings,
Cindy
I really needed this poem today.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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I am glad my words have meaning. Thank you. Elaine
Comment from judiverse
A lovely presentation. It would have made a good contest entry. I like the way you amplify each of the words you've chosen for your acrostic. HOLY is especially effective with your words Holy entity, peaceful dove, delicate bird. Excellent use of rhyme. Uplifting, encouraging thoughts. judi
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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A lovely presentation. It would have made a good contest entry. I like the way you amplify each of the words you've chosen for your acrostic. HOLY is especially effective with your words Holy entity, peaceful dove, delicate bird. Excellent use of rhyme. Uplifting, encouraging thoughts. judi
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you again for a generous amount of stars. Elaine
Comment from Bryce 1
This is an ever swooning poetic piece of a spiritual revery. I am engaged throughout and reminded of my own spiritual beleifs. I dig and lord knows ya made a good one here
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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This is an ever swooning poetic piece of a spiritual revery. I am engaged throughout and reminded of my own spiritual beleifs. I dig and lord knows ya made a good one here
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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I am honored by your words. Thank you. Elaine