Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Saria,
This free verse seems to be you grieving for your grandparents. It seems you grandparents were very giving and helped you through some of lives problems. Maybe you read with your grandfather.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Happy Holidays.
Joan
P S I would like to let you know that I have just published a book titled "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com and there is a link to it at the bottom of my profile bio.
You can also find it by going on Amazon.com and search Joan Pechter The interloper.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025

Hi, they were indeed my light. Thanks for the review!

reply by dragonpoet on 01-Jan-2025

You're very welcome, Saria.
Happy New Year.
Joan

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Remembering those who have passed before us but left us with everlasting memories of love and support is a gift we should cherish and always hold dear. Your poem honors your grandparents and is very special.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024

Thank you so much!

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

What an alluring, mysterious vibe you have created here while setting the stage for elders who were absolutely adored and now missed. Beautiful work. Xo

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024

Thank you so much!