2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 70 "Elysium Fields Forever"*
5 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
You pulled this Sixer right out of the vault, Gypsy, with this Brilliant, chilling piece adding a love story with a little bit of morbidness. Right up my ally.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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You pulled this Sixer right out of the vault, Gypsy, with this Brilliant, chilling piece adding a love story with a little bit of morbidness. Right up my ally.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Well-deserved.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I love the way you've interwoven these references into this very stylish tanka and naani verse. The themes of love, loss and grief are tenderly explored and depicted here with a beautiful, positive outcome. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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I love the way you've interwoven these references into this very stylish tanka and naani verse. The themes of love, loss and grief are tenderly explored and depicted here with a beautiful, positive outcome. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
cool goth pics
not sure which came first - pics or tanka, but it all goes together well!
great imagery and smooth flow
and thanks for the notes, too - reread the poem after the notes and "got it" even more lol
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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cool goth pics
not sure which came first - pics or tanka, but it all goes together well!
great imagery and smooth flow
and thanks for the notes, too - reread the poem after the notes and "got it" even more lol
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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The top Pic came first. The bottom one I had.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was very supernatural and kind of played with my mind. Mythological touches tended to up the feeling of other worldly. Very interesting and your author notes interested me enough to look up Elysium and Gehenna. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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This was very supernatural and kind of played with my mind. Mythological touches tended to up the feeling of other worldly. Very interesting and your author notes interested me enough to look up Elysium and Gehenna. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen 😊
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
I remember reading this book many years ago, that one its characters discovered a way to cheat death. This is a very well illustrated tanka with great imagery through the words and pictures. Thank you for sharing
RJ
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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I remember reading this book many years ago, that one its characters discovered a way to cheat death. This is a very well illustrated tanka with great imagery through the words and pictures. Thank you for sharing
RJ
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy
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You're welcome
RJ