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Wilted Flower

5-7-5 poem

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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poem writing prompt. You have met the syllable count criteria nicely. Good descriptive imagery. thanks you for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
    Thank you
Comment from Begin Again
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Oh yes, the hot, scourging sun can wilt the flowers and us as well. Everything turns brown and turns to dust. This is a great haiku, and I thank you for sharing it. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
    Thank you