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Deaths Tolled Ever On

Potlatch Club Bragi poem

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Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks for commemorating the day with a poem, Joan. I especially liked your ending:
"Death like this makes sensations
Of courage or unity in all souls"
It did briefly bring our country together. But now we're divided again.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
    Thanks for taking the time to read and review my poem. I am glad you liked it. I try to comment on it every once in a while. It should never be forgotten. I think it should be a national holiday so all remember it.
    Joan
Comment from royowen
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I remember it caused a ruckus here, it was televised as it happened, it seemed more like an attack of aliens than anything else, we visited the freedom Tower a few years later while in New York, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
    Thanks for your nice comments and high rating, Roy.
    Joan
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a nicely written and rhymed poem for the club event and I enjoyed very much listening to it and it flows very well when it is read aloud. May you have a wonderful weekend and may God bless you. Patricia.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
    Thanks for your kind words and generous rating, Patricia.
    Joan