In Memory of Nomi's Wife, Yvonne
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "The Love Lives On"Posts to let Nomi know we are here for him
17 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
The words of your beautiful, heartfelt poem flows with graceful rhymes that are soothing and comforting. My thoughts and prayers are with Nomi as he tries to adjust to life without his lifelong partner. Since I am not a poet, I deeply appreciate your ability to express condolences in poetry.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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The words of your beautiful, heartfelt poem flows with graceful rhymes that are soothing and comforting. My thoughts and prayers are with Nomi as he tries to adjust to life without his lifelong partner. Since I am not a poet, I deeply appreciate your ability to express condolences in poetry.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you. I know it isn't going to be easy for him to adjust after 51 years of marriage. Losing the one that means the most to you, it very hard.
Beth
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine poem for Nomi and I enjoyed your sensitive and caring words with good rhymes and supporting sentiments here Beth, a soothing and heartfelt post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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A fine poem for Nomi and I enjoyed your sensitive and caring words with good rhymes and supporting sentiments here Beth, a soothing and heartfelt post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you. I appreciate your reading it. I know will be comforted to realize his FanStory friends really care about him.
Beth
Comment from Ric Myworld
Our hearts and prayers are with Nomi as he strives to overcome the sorrow and loss of his sweet Yvonne. And I'm sure that all of the kindness and caring words sent his way will soften the blow a bit. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Our hearts and prayers are with Nomi as he strives to overcome the sorrow and loss of his sweet Yvonne. And I'm sure that all of the kindness and caring words sent his way will soften the blow a bit. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thanks for reading my poem. I feel sad for him. I sure it was a shock to wake up and find his wife had died. I feel so bad for him.
Beth
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Yes, it terrible. A shock he'll never forget.
Comment from karenina
I've used a half a box of tissues reading all of these wonderful poems for Nomi.
Yours is very special, Beth.
Your sympathy threaded with the truth is factual and wise!
Karenina
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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I've used a half a box of tissues reading all of these wonderful poems for Nomi.
Yours is very special, Beth.
Your sympathy threaded with the truth is factual and wise!
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Karenina. I feel for him. I know how much it hurts.
Beth
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I know you do...which is why your words in particular have such weight to them!
Comment from jmdg1954
What a wonderful heartfelt and warm poem you wrote for our friend, Nomi.
Along with the other poems, maybe not immediately, but there will come a time he will read these and truly appreciate their meaning.
Thanks for sharing,
John
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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What a wonderful heartfelt and warm poem you wrote for our friend, Nomi.
Along with the other poems, maybe not immediately, but there will come a time he will read these and truly appreciate their meaning.
Thanks for sharing,
John
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you, John. I know how much it hurts. I've been there.
Beth
Comment from Wendy G
Another beautiful and meaningful poem for Nomi, full of compassion and encouragement. He will greatly value this book of treasured poems and I am sure it will help to ease his pain.
Wendy
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Another beautiful and meaningful poem for Nomi, full of compassion and encouragement. He will greatly value this book of treasured poems and I am sure it will help to ease his pain.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thanks for the review. I feel so bad for him and I think he will appreciate the book.
Beth
Comment from nancyjam
This is lovely, Beth, and I'm sure Nomi will appreciate and be comforted by your lovely poem. Nicely rhymed with strong meter for a pleasant read.
Nancy
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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This is lovely, Beth, and I'm sure Nomi will appreciate and be comforted by your lovely poem. Nicely rhymed with strong meter for a pleasant read.
Nancy
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Nancy. I hope Nomi will find some comfort in our poems and know our FanStory family all really care about him.
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely written for our dear friend, and I do hope that the words that you have written here will comfort his heart. I know that if there have been written for me at my time of grief, it would've brought comfort to my heart. Patricia.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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This is very nicely written for our dear friend, and I do hope that the words that you have written here will comfort his heart. I know that if there have been written for me at my time of grief, it would've brought comfort to my heart. Patricia.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Patricia. I hope he is comforted by our poems.
Beth
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a sweet and thoughtful verse for dear Nomi which I'm sure he'll appreciate at this difficult time. I think you'll find one word missing in the first line of the second stanza: ...hidden (in) your heart. Thanks, Beth, for sharing this and your kindness to Nomi. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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This is a sweet and thoughtful verse for dear Nomi which I'm sure he'll appreciate at this difficult time. I think you'll find one word missing in the first line of the second stanza: ...hidden (in) your heart. Thanks, Beth, for sharing this and your kindness to Nomi. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you Debbie. I liked read you poem as well. I feel very sad for him.
Beth
Comment from royowen
The writing that comes from those who've their life partners is previous to the recently breaded like Nolan, you now share a vpcommon bond with him, although I've lost loved ones, the sting from losing a spouse would be worse, beautifully written Beth, blessings Roy
Suggestion, : the love you shared (is) hidden (in) your heart
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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The writing that comes from those who've their life partners is previous to the recently breaded like Nolan, you now share a vpcommon bond with him, although I've lost loved ones, the sting from losing a spouse would be worse, beautifully written Beth, blessings Roy
Suggestion, : the love you shared (is) hidden (in) your heart
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Roy. I feel sad for him.
Beth
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Me too