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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm cheering this lady. I would do the same and I'm really happy there the timing was perfect for this tempestuous storm. I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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I'm cheering this lady. I would do the same and I'm really happy there the timing was perfect for this tempestuous storm. I enjoyed reading this beautiful poem.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend 😊
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
cool tanka - loved the double meaning of a storm
great imagery and smooth flow throughout
nice work!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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cool tanka - loved the double meaning of a storm
great imagery and smooth flow throughout
nice work!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Excellent! Love the pun on storm and the beautiful presentation that reinforces the force of that quarrel. As ever, Gypsy, all said so succinctly and effectively in your delightful verse, not to mention its injection of humour:)) Take care Debbi
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Excellent! Love the pun on storm and the beautiful presentation that reinforces the force of that quarrel. As ever, Gypsy, all said so succinctly and effectively in your delightful verse, not to mention its injection of humour:)) Take care Debbi
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Sugarray77
Hi Gypsy... I hope you are having a really fun Friday! Your verse about retribution and choosing to throw the man out, is a well-chosen path to take when unfaithfulness is apparent, but a little reflection might do her some good. What do you need to do to gain the upper ground before you throw him out... i. e empty bank accounts, sell things and give the money to Grandma to keep til a later date, etc... a little planning always helps. But, it isn't dramatic is it, and doesn't make for good writing. :)
Melissa
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Hi Gypsy... I hope you are having a really fun Friday! Your verse about retribution and choosing to throw the man out, is a well-chosen path to take when unfaithfulness is apparent, but a little reflection might do her some good. What do you need to do to gain the upper ground before you throw him out... i. e empty bank accounts, sell things and give the money to Grandma to keep til a later date, etc... a little planning always helps. But, it isn't dramatic is it, and doesn't make for good writing. :)
Melissa
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Anger usually follows when suspicion of infidelity is confirmed. Your comparison to it as a tempestuous storm fits the theme of human anger very well. Thank you for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Anger usually follows when suspicion of infidelity is confirmed. Your comparison to it as a tempestuous storm fits the theme of human anger very well. Thank you for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome.
Have a great weekend yourself.
RJ
Comment from royowen
Somehow there does seem there's enough evidence to throw both him and his apparel out, mind you it depends on whom the house's title's name is in, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Somehow there does seem there's enough evidence to throw both him and his apparel out, mind you it depends on whom the house's title's name is in, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. 😊
Gypsy
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Welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Yes, especially if that lipstick isn't hers! Lol. The storm can take care of the laundry. I can understand her actions. I have heard of women giving their husbands repeated second chances but usually those men who are just unfaithful can't keep to their covenant of marriage.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Yes, especially if that lipstick isn't hers! Lol. The storm can take care of the laundry. I can understand her actions. I have heard of women giving their husbands repeated second chances but usually those men who are just unfaithful can't keep to their covenant of marriage.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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My ex is a cheater and he was very good at denying and lying to me. I feel good about letting him go. When I miss him I remind myself the way he was with me. We can't change other people unless they want to.
Thank you very much, big sister. Have a wonderful weekend ☺️
Marival ❤️