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Never, Never, Never

My character is brave.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
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Author,
Your story is really good. You had me at not tolerating gossip or bossiness or I think also no undue judgment on people.
Nice story.
Grammar and diction are excellent.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Good luck

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 30-Sep-2024
    Thank you Cindy, for you encpouraging review
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your story captures an intense moment so well! I really enjoyed how you portrayed Jenny's nervousness and determination in the face of a challenging crowd. The dialogue was perfect. It added a lot to the story and felt natural. This was such an enjoyable read. Well done!

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
    Thank you Michael for your encouraging words. I learn a lot from your reviews. Maybe you know that already. Have a great weekend.
Comment from Begin Again
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Well done! As I read your story, I could think of a few supposedly intelligent people who could learn from your lessons. I shiver with thoughts of where our world is headed with its disrespect and lack of concern for the little man.
smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024

reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
    I share your concern, Carol. Politicians and their egos do not impress me much I am glad you could relate to the story