Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, Gypsy-----I had a bit of trouble figuring out who this poem is about..lol! What a disgusting human being he is. He's a phycology book come to life, that's for sure!

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024

I didn't want to make it political and I figured the ones who realize who the poem is about I didn't have to spell it out.

It's so satisfying to watch Trump so afraid and falling apart. 😆 🤣
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend 😊

Gypsy

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

AHAHAHAHAHA!!! LOL!!!
nice touch with the diet cokes!
and the "irresistible man" stanza.
too bad you could squeeze in dogs and cats and childless cat ladies LOL!

totally fun and interesting and thought-provoking poem
great imagery and smooth flow throughout

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024

Hahaha. So glad you enjoyed this one, not everybody's cup of tea around here. "They're eating dogs!" Haha

The debate was perfect, I was so stressed but Kamala came through with flying colors.... I'm so happy. Trump is too scare to have a second debate but I wish he would.

Thank you very much, Shelley 😊

Gypsy hugs 😊

reply by shelley kaye on 12-Sep-2024

he says he won... just like the election LOL. so delusional!

reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024

He went to the spin room right after telling everyone he was the best and got great numbers. LoL I wonder if he believes his lies.

reply by shelley kaye on 12-Sep-2024

he believes something lol

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. Well, it seems that this "Pinocchio" is much like someone who is trying to run for president, even though he is a felon and a liar and evaded taxes. The original wooden marionette was much nicer.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024

LoL yes, that's him. I even colored the hair orange.

Thank you very much, big sister.

❤️ marival ❤️

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This poem really captured the essence of the character of Pinocchio. The grandeur of his lies that kept getting him into trouble, was captured here. I really enjoyed this. Gretchen

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024

LoL

Thank you very much for your excellent review.

Gypsy 😊

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Interesting perspective, reminds me of people in the news, and even of others who reports the news. This one is different and refreshing because it is. Thank you for sharing
this
RJ

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024

Thank you very much, RJ

Gypsy 😊

reply by RJ Heritage on 12-Sep-2024

You're welcome
RJ

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Wonderful visual, Gypsy, and such fun, lighthearted humour to match it. The message is he's old but can still pull in the crowds. With good alliteration and those gold possessions to his name (I had to look up rumpus room), I really enjoyed reading about this malleable marionette. Well done! Debbie

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024

Thank you very much, Debbie

Gypsy 😊😘

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

This poem has such a playful tone! I really enjoyed the confidence with the almost absurd imagery such as the toilet. Love your phrases. Especially being a "malleable marionette" and the playful jab at famous phrases. It made this so fun and also so funny! This was a wonderfully enjoyable read!

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024

Thank you very much, Michael

Gypsy 😊