Asymmetry.
Ugly duckling?4 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I've never liked symmetry whether it be in home decor or physical appearance. Perfection for me is not beauty. It's always the spirit that shines through that defines true beauty. I enjoyed your well crafted, rhyming verse which sounds more than a bit harsh on yourself. A lovely ending too because jolliness is another attractive asset. Well done and good luck! A real beauty of a contender:)) Debbie
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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I've never liked symmetry whether it be in home decor or physical appearance. Perfection for me is not beauty. It's always the spirit that shines through that defines true beauty. I enjoyed your well crafted, rhyming verse which sounds more than a bit harsh on yourself. A lovely ending too because jolliness is another attractive asset. Well done and good luck! A real beauty of a contender:)) Debbie
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thanks, Debbie.
Comment from F. William Lester
I've got to hand it to you - that took guts. Being open about one's frailties takes courage, and you have it in full measure. Well written. Kudos to you. I have one comment: true beauty is measured by what's beneath the surface and I believe that is something you possess, again, in full measure. Beautiful words. Excellent thoughts. Have a wonderful day and be well.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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I've got to hand it to you - that took guts. Being open about one's frailties takes courage, and you have it in full measure. Well written. Kudos to you. I have one comment: true beauty is measured by what's beneath the surface and I believe that is something you possess, again, in full measure. Beautiful words. Excellent thoughts. Have a wonderful day and be well.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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What a lovely review. Many thanks.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Jansella
Don't judge a book by its cover. Personality is the real beauty. Don't know people's journey and what they went through. A good soul is what lasts forever while beauty fades. A lovely poem.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Don't judge a book by its cover. Personality is the real beauty. Don't know people's journey and what they went through. A good soul is what lasts forever while beauty fades. A lovely poem.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you. Appreciated.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love the way your poem embraces imperfections with such charm. I love the humor! The playful tone makes the message of not judging by appearances really stick. The closing lines are beautiful. It's such an uplifting read!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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I love the way your poem embraces imperfections with such charm. I love the humor! The playful tone makes the message of not judging by appearances really stick. The closing lines are beautiful. It's such an uplifting read!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Super review, Michael. Thank you.