A Lovers Confession
When that person can't escape your thoughts...6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You're very brave attempting a contest for your very first milestone post. Congratulations!!! I enjoyed the rhyming and near rhyming scheme. This entry read very smoothly. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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You're very brave attempting a contest for your very first milestone post. Congratulations!!! I enjoyed the rhyming and near rhyming scheme. This entry read very smoothly. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Begin Again
Welcome to Fanstory and congratulations on posting your first Milestone poem. I hope that you enjoy your stay and find encouragement in the reviews that help you expand your efforts. You've started with a very lovely romantic poem and I enjoyed.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Welcome to Fanstory and congratulations on posting your first Milestone poem. I hope that you enjoy your stay and find encouragement in the reviews that help you expand your efforts. You've started with a very lovely romantic poem and I enjoyed.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you :)
Comment from jessizero
Congratulations on your first milestone post! I enjoyed your rhymes and rhyme scheme, and I thought the sentiments were lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Congratulations on your first milestone post! I enjoyed your rhymes and rhyme scheme, and I thought the sentiments were lovely. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Nicki.B
Firstly good luck! And of course welcome. A beautiful love poem is the perfect start to your journey here.
It's got lovely flow and rhyme and the love oozes out of each sonnet.
Best of luck with the contest! Well done!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Firstly good luck! And of course welcome. A beautiful love poem is the perfect start to your journey here.
It's got lovely flow and rhyme and the love oozes out of each sonnet.
Best of luck with the contest! Well done!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from way2gokevs
Love your poem of obsession in love, it flows beautifully and leaves the reader feeling that they can relate to what you are portraying in your words. Very good, keep up the good work. Cheers, Kev
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Love your poem of obsession in love, it flows beautifully and leaves the reader feeling that they can relate to what you are portraying in your words. Very good, keep up the good work. Cheers, Kev
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from royowen
Firstly, welcome to fanstory Khobe, you produced an unusually rhymed poem. Of abba I'm your poem, being a good attempt to write this work, I'm sure you'll enjoy writing here, I've made a couple of suggestions of misspellings and a rhym
Typo : In thy (possesion) possession? 2: (obsdessed) with you.
Obsessed it's true, might be better than 'with you'
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Firstly, welcome to fanstory Khobe, you produced an unusually rhymed poem. Of abba I'm your poem, being a good attempt to write this work, I'm sure you'll enjoy writing here, I've made a couple of suggestions of misspellings and a rhym
Typo : In thy (possesion) possession? 2: (obsdessed) with you.
Obsessed it's true, might be better than 'with you'
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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I appreciate the feedback and for pointing out the typos! Thank you!
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Well done
