Comment from
jessizero
I really liked the message behind this poem. I also enjoyed your rhymes and repetition. Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
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Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
This was excellent. I love the line "To be content is enough". It shares the message beautifully. This is well written with a natural flow. For me this was a reminder of the value in finding peace within oneself - rather than chasing external measures of success.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
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