Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Headwaters Academy"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
2 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
This is a solid chapter and the only things that I see that could be an issue are: The editor removed the spacing and formatting of your post. Suggest you go back edit that. Also, I recommend increasing the font size to at least 18.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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This is a solid chapter and the only things that I see that could be an issue are: The editor removed the spacing and formatting of your post. Suggest you go back edit that. Also, I recommend increasing the font size to at least 18.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your feedback- I will look at it right away
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done! I think what I like most about it is the characters you have in this story. Cindra Conners relentless drive and planning make her a powerful force. The way you've shown her strategic maneuvers is so well written. The tension in your writing is powerful. Especially in the scenes where Cindra asserts her authority. Her calculated use of information and her control over Grant Hansen is something else. This is an excellent chapter. So well written.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Nicely done! I think what I like most about it is the characters you have in this story. Cindra Conners relentless drive and planning make her a powerful force. The way you've shown her strategic maneuvers is so well written. The tension in your writing is powerful. Especially in the scenes where Cindra asserts her authority. Her calculated use of information and her control over Grant Hansen is something else. This is an excellent chapter. So well written.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your feedback, Michael. I appreciate it so much.