Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
Is it humans killing humans here or is there a crazy creature about? A fun post for the contest and this one made me smile. We live in a crazy world most of the time, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
Comment from
jessizero
I'm not sure, but I would consider using "has" instead of "is." You did a great job with this poem. Your syllable count was perfect. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024