The Silver Unicorn
fantasy10 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was a lovely piece of fantasy with the "Silver" theme. I loved the imagery and I enjoyed your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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This was a lovely piece of fantasy with the "Silver" theme. I loved the imagery and I enjoyed your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you. Elaine
Comment from papa55mike
We all need a support unicorn! Please check this line: fairies, elves,ladybugs, fireflies. You need a space between the comma and ladybugs. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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We all need a support unicorn! Please check this line: fairies, elves,ladybugs, fireflies. You need a space between the comma and ladybugs. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thanks for pointing out the comma needing space, commas are not my strong suit. Thank you for taking time to read and review. Elaine
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A charming, magical verse, making good use of that silver theme, both in the colour of the unicorn and also the glinting, sparkling sensation against the night sky. Thank you for this excellent share. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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A charming, magical verse, making good use of that silver theme, both in the colour of the unicorn and also the glinting, sparkling sensation against the night sky. Thank you for this excellent share. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my fantasy poem. Elaine
Comment from royowen
Unicorn were supposed to be living on the earth before the flood, apparently they were frolicking and missed the boat. The mystical mythical, people like to put faith in the magical world of the inexplicable. Good luck, Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Unicorn were supposed to be living on the earth before the flood, apparently they were frolicking and missed the boat. The mystical mythical, people like to put faith in the magical world of the inexplicable. Good luck, Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you for reading and enjoying. Elaine
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Bless you
Comment from Begin Again
Fantasy and the land of mystic magic...who would not like to step out their weary shoes and ride on a silver unicorn. You painted a beautiful picture with your words and I can imagine young children falling in love with the idea.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Fantasy and the land of mystic magic...who would not like to step out their weary shoes and ride on a silver unicorn. You painted a beautiful picture with your words and I can imagine young children falling in love with the idea.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from pome lover
well, wouldn't we all love to have a silver unicorn to ride and escape our lives for a bit. I can imagine yours as a nursing home nurse has plenty of sadness involved and is tiring.This is a"release" poem, which is good.
One small suggestion, in the 2nd line, hearts should be singular. Other than that, a neat poem.
Katharine
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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well, wouldn't we all love to have a silver unicorn to ride and escape our lives for a bit. I can imagine yours as a nursing home nurse has plenty of sadness involved and is tiring.This is a"release" poem, which is good.
One small suggestion, in the 2nd line, hearts should be singular. Other than that, a neat poem.
Katharine
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the suggestion. I am glad you enjoyed my silver unicorn. Elaine
Comment from RodG
Who has not fantasized about taming a beautiful unicorn and riding him off to magical lands? Young readers will enjoy this short poem because you describe the adventures so well. Rod
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Who has not fantasized about taming a beautiful unicorn and riding him off to magical lands? Young readers will enjoy this short poem because you describe the adventures so well. Rod
Comment Written 09-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for your encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from Ric Myworld
I seldom to almost never read poetry, other than the few I've been reading for years. But I'm glad to have stumbled across your post and enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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I seldom to almost never read poetry, other than the few I've been reading for years. But I'm glad to have stumbled across your post and enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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I placed third in the contest. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
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Congratulations of your ribbon!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem paints a magical picture! The change from despair to delight is beautifully shared. After reading it I feel like I was part of a journey into a world of fantasy and wonder.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Your poem paints a magical picture! The change from despair to delight is beautifully shared. After reading it I feel like I was part of a journey into a world of fantasy and wonder.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Glad you enjoyed my fantasy poem. Thank you. Elaine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This poem drifts into a fantasy world here and I enjoyed the rest from reality whilst reading this tantalising poem filled with magical dreaming, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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This poem drifts into a fantasy world here and I enjoyed the rest from reality whilst reading this tantalising poem filled with magical dreaming, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thank you. Elaine