Psalms
Psalms is my favorite book in the Bible10 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Very nicely done. I have done a few of these. they are harder than they look. Good work here. I will be attacking the roganization of my desk next. It is piled high and over stuffed.
Things take a long time when It is just you. Whine whine whine. Anyhoo, good work. I owe you three more. Karen
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Very nicely done. I have done a few of these. they are harder than they look. Good work here. I will be attacking the roganization of my desk next. It is piled high and over stuffed.
Things take a long time when It is just you. Whine whine whine. Anyhoo, good work. I owe you three more. Karen
Comment Written 23-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the great review. They are hard.
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:-)
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Brenda,
Your spiritual poetry contains precepts we can all live by. Sometimes kindness is paid with meanness, because some people view kindness as a weakness. I don't. (My living situation is not ideal, but I cope by reading and writing on this site). There are many kind people on Fanstory.
Wonderful words to live by Brenda,
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Brenda,
Your spiritual poetry contains precepts we can all live by. Sometimes kindness is paid with meanness, because some people view kindness as a weakness. I don't. (My living situation is not ideal, but I cope by reading and writing on this site). There are many kind people on Fanstory.
Wonderful words to live by Brenda,
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 04-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2024
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Thank you.
Comment from jaded831
I do pray everyday. I try to treat others like I would like to be treated, somehow that has gotten lost in today's world. Your poem reminds us of that. The only thing I would change is the word quality, I feel should be added to the line that comes before.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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I do pray everyday. I try to treat others like I would like to be treated, somehow that has gotten lost in today's world. Your poem reminds us of that. The only thing I would change is the word quality, I feel should be added to the line that comes before.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2024
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Thank you
Comment from lyenochka
The Psalms are a source of "soothing" words and we in turn can bless others with our words. Your acrostic gives us good ways to follow the LORD by prayer and loving others. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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The Psalms are a source of "soothing" words and we in turn can bless others with our words. Your acrostic gives us good ways to follow the LORD by prayer and loving others. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you
Comment from shelley kaye
*the "L" line is 2 lines - the word quality got dropped down.
Pray everyday for our world
Show compassion and kindness to others
Always treat others as you want to be treated
Love is God's greatest
quality
Many people are hoping for peace
Soothing words help those in need
other than that typo... a nice psalms acrostic
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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*the "L" line is 2 lines - the word quality got dropped down.
Pray everyday for our world
Show compassion and kindness to others
Always treat others as you want to be treated
Love is God's greatest
quality
Many people are hoping for peace
Soothing words help those in need
other than that typo... a nice psalms acrostic
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, Psalms, has the proper vertical formatting and reminds the readers that the general thrust of the Bibles purpose is to bring the world together in the spirit of brotherhood and decency.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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This acrostic poem, Psalms, has the proper vertical formatting and reminds the readers that the general thrust of the Bibles purpose is to bring the world together in the spirit of brotherhood and decency.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Nicki.B
This a lovely faithful message go all. If there were more prayers to God, there may be less negative energies in this world. Beautiful imagery and presentation. Well done
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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This a lovely faithful message go all. If there were more prayers to God, there may be less negative energies in this world. Beautiful imagery and presentation. Well done
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is beautifully heartfelt. Each line in your poem seems to offer a gentle reminder of how we can help one another. It's a touching poem with a wonderful message. Thank you for sharing it!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Your poem is beautifully heartfelt. Each line in your poem seems to offer a gentle reminder of how we can help one another. It's a touching poem with a wonderful message. Thank you for sharing it!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much.
Comment from mermaids
Psalms are also my favorite book of the Bible, I read them frequently. "Love is God's greatest quality" is a perfect use of words that speaks to the reader. Your acrostic form gives good wisdom to the reader and is an excellent faith based poem.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Psalms are also my favorite book of the Bible, I read them frequently. "Love is God's greatest quality" is a perfect use of words that speaks to the reader. Your acrostic form gives good wisdom to the reader and is an excellent faith based poem.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from LJbutterfly
Psalms is also one of my favorite books in the Bible. For your Bible Acrostic Poem contest entry, you have provided some of the most meaningful statements humans should ascribe to, to insure a faithful life in God's grace and love. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Psalms is also one of my favorite books in the Bible. For your Bible Acrostic Poem contest entry, you have provided some of the most meaningful statements humans should ascribe to, to insure a faithful life in God's grace and love. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much.