2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
The moon will be with us for our lifetimes at least. Thank you for sharing your God given talent with us again. The poem and the presentation are both wonderful.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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The moon will be with us for our lifetimes at least. Thank you for sharing your God given talent with us again. The poem and the presentation are both wonderful.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
This is well presented, the satori that follows the dash answers the question how her life is reconciled with friendship she has found in the harvest moon. As I read this, its imagery took me back to Shakespeare's, "A Midsummer Night's Dream."
Well done.
RJ
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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This is well presented, the satori that follows the dash answers the question how her life is reconciled with friendship she has found in the harvest moon. As I read this, its imagery took me back to Shakespeare's, "A Midsummer Night's Dream."
Well done.
RJ
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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I did think about 'a midsummer night's dream' but there is no relation between the title and the poem.
Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
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I did think about 'a midsummer night's dream' but there is no relation between the title and the poem.
Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from shelley kaye
well, the moon will be around for a couple hundred more years, so good choice!
great haiku with a hopefulness to it
smooth flow and nice imagery
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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well, the moon will be around for a couple hundred more years, so good choice!
great haiku with a hopefulness to it
smooth flow and nice imagery
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Katiemae1977
I love this one Gypsy. I love the shift just before the last line. This is a really good modern haiku. I could feel the sentiment of the person you speak of in the haiku.
Beautifully done.
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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I love this one Gypsy. I love the shift just before the last line. This is a really good modern haiku. I could feel the sentiment of the person you speak of in the haiku.
Beautifully done.
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊 xoxox
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Thank you very much, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊 xoxox
Comment from GWHARGIS
Unfortunately, this is a sad but true poem. Sometimes the widow or widower gets forgotten just like the deceased. It's as if they both died. They are mourned but slowly, life goes on around the survivor. It takes great friends and a supportive family to alleviate that. Great poem. Melancholy. Gretchen
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Unfortunately, this is a sad but true poem. Sometimes the widow or widower gets forgotten just like the deceased. It's as if they both died. They are mourned but slowly, life goes on around the survivor. It takes great friends and a supportive family to alleviate that. Great poem. Melancholy. Gretchen
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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After my ex-husband and I got a divorce, I lost all our friends. But I had a loving family so that is alright. Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy 😊
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After my ex-husband and I got a divorce, I lost all our friends. But I had a loving family so that is alright. Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
The moon is a faithful friend even if the other friends aren't as reliable. Sometimes it's like that. Either the friends were closer to him or the friends are used to meeting as a couple, or they feel awkward as to how to comfort her. It happens often. Well said.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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The moon is a faithful friend even if the other friends aren't as reliable. Sometimes it's like that. Either the friends were closer to him or the friends are used to meeting as a couple, or they feel awkward as to how to comfort her. It happens often. Well said.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister 😊
Love,
MariVal
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The silence of death permeates and leaves us feeling lonely and we make the most of the peace and learn to appreciate smaller pleasures, I can identify with your words here, a fine post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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The silence of death permeates and leaves us feeling lonely and we make the most of the peace and learn to appreciate smaller pleasures, I can identify with your words here, a fine post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Dolly
Gypsy 😊
