Comment from
Debbie D'Arcy
This is a deeply poignant read and dark and forbidding as I would expect from a Poe verse. The repetitive line is very characteristic too. In short, an excellent entry for the contest. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
Appreciate the time you spent on the read and for your comments.
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Your poem beautifully shares a deep sense of loss and longing. I felt drawn into the atmosphere of Arlington Way. I truly appreciate how you've shared these feelings with such intensity. Your writing deeply engages and leaves a lasting impact.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
Thank you for the read and the encouraging review. Much appreciated.