Travel
2D Acrostic6 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a difficult challenge which you've undertaken imaginatively, covering all the excitement and positivity of going places. Your visual too is a perfect accompaniment. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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This is a difficult challenge which you've undertaken imaginatively, covering all the excitement and positivity of going places. Your visual too is a perfect accompaniment. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 03-Sep-2024
Comment from shelley kaye
"energy looms, the road awaits - Escape life's trials"
for some reason i loved that part!
a great 2d acrostic
nice imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
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"energy looms, the road awaits - Escape life's trials"
for some reason i loved that part!
a great 2d acrostic
nice imagery and smooth flow
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
I love your acrostic. You pulled off the 2D capturing the excitement and energy of a vacation. From roaming vast enourmus lands to the amazing visuals and relaxation, each line paints perfection. The idea of escaping life's trials and embracing leisure comes through strongly. It's a great reminder of the joy and adventure travel can bring us.
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I love your acrostic. You pulled off the 2D capturing the excitement and energy of a vacation. From roaming vast enourmus lands to the amazing visuals and relaxation, each line paints perfection. The idea of escaping life's trials and embracing leisure comes through strongly. It's a great reminder of the joy and adventure travel can bring us.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a very satisfying visit and this adventure made me think of my own trips to fine places, a pleasing acrostic presentation for the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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This sounds like a very satisfying visit and this adventure made me think of my own trips to fine places, a pleasing acrostic presentation for the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a delightful poem You capture the excitement of travel so well. I almost feel ike this is an invitation to explore and enjoy every moment. The energy and enthusiasm in your writing is fantastic. You really brought the sense of adventure to life. Wonderful job!
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What a delightful poem You capture the excitement of travel so well. I almost feel ike this is an invitation to explore and enjoy every moment. The energy and enthusiasm in your writing is fantastic. You really brought the sense of adventure to life. Wonderful job!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
Comment from kiwisteveh
A slightly tricky Acrostic format with the added requirement of a set number of words per line. You have managed it well, although I'm wondering whether 'roundabout' should be one word. It can be used as one word, but possibly with a different meaning.
Attractive presentation and the general feel of the poem is positive. Good luck.
Steve
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A slightly tricky Acrostic format with the added requirement of a set number of words per line. You have managed it well, although I'm wondering whether 'roundabout' should be one word. It can be used as one word, but possibly with a different meaning.
Attractive presentation and the general feel of the poem is positive. Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024