2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed your poem. I like the words: summer night winds dance and sing. This is well written poem. The picture goes well with your words. I love your poems. You're such a good writer.
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reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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I enjoyed your poem. I like the words: summer night winds dance and sing. This is well written poem. The picture goes well with your words. I love your poems. You're such a good writer.
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Comment Written 01-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Brenda
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Harry Craft
Wow! Cool poem. I really enjoyed reading this one. It brought back childhood memories. A very good message in the poem as well. I believe we can all relate to this at some point in our life!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Wow! Cool poem. I really enjoyed reading this one. It brought back childhood memories. A very good message in the poem as well. I believe we can all relate to this at some point in our life!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
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You are so very welcome!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
i like this poem about reflecting on the love of your grandparents who died a long time ago but their memories live on I like the imagery of the sky tremble in blue and I like the James Bond reference
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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i like this poem about reflecting on the love of your grandparents who died a long time ago but their memories live on I like the imagery of the sky tremble in blue and I like the James Bond reference
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from patcelaw
Very well worded in very beautifully presented. I enjoyed it very much. I wish you the very best for the weekend and may God bless you. Have a wonderful day. Patricia.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Very well worded in very beautifully presented. I enjoyed it very much. I wish you the very best for the weekend and may God bless you. Have a wonderful day. Patricia.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
It's funny what the pen spawn, not all thoughts are coherent, some thoughts can thrust their noses into one's mind, the mind doesn't necessarily move cohesively, but all the senses can project imagery, spark unexpectedly, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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It's funny what the pen spawn, not all thoughts are coherent, some thoughts can thrust their noses into one's mind, the mind doesn't necessarily move cohesively, but all the senses can project imagery, spark unexpectedly, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy
Gypsy 😊
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Most welcome
Comment from Shanbreen
Gypsy Blue Rose, I like this poem. I particularly like the fact that you used the 5 senses in writing it. The last line is so haunting-- "their spirits linger in my heart"-- yet so inspirational. I wish I had a 6 to give.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Gypsy Blue Rose, I like this poem. I particularly like the fact that you used the 5 senses in writing it. The last line is so haunting-- "their spirits linger in my heart"-- yet so inspirational. I wish I had a 6 to give.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Shanbreen
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I know it sounds silly at my age, but I still wish upon the stars and in the novel, I'm writing, right now, my heroine relies on the stars often. You did an excellent job including the senses in this beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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I know it sounds silly at my age, but I still wish upon the stars and in the novel, I'm writing, right now, my heroine relies on the stars often. You did an excellent job including the senses in this beautiful poem.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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It's not silly, I wish upon a star too. Thank you very much. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from zanya
A precious memory perhaps, reflected upon here in these stanzas, woven in strands of beautiful, expressive poetic language and bilingual, a poetic tapestry.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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A precious memory perhaps, reflected upon here in these stanzas, woven in strands of beautiful, expressive poetic language and bilingual, a poetic tapestry.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
I really like this one, it is so well written and presented with strong imagery. While I can't relate to feeling the literal presence of loved one who have passed, I can definitely relate to their memories etched in my mind, heart, and even physical objects, like the smell of my mother in her hat, and my grandmother's potpourri flowers, long after they have died.
Well done.
RJ
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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I really like this one, it is so well written and presented with strong imagery. While I can't relate to feeling the literal presence of loved one who have passed, I can definitely relate to their memories etched in my mind, heart, and even physical objects, like the smell of my mother in her hat, and my grandmother's potpourri flowers, long after they have died.
Well done.
RJ
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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My mom died when I was 10 years old. There are times when I wish she was still with me. Thank you very much for the exceptional six-star review. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome.
RJ
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A beautiful, nostalgic memory capturing the childhood delights of summer with all those evocative senses heightened! An absolute pleasure to see, hear, smell, taste and touch:)
and blend(s) - referring to the jasmine (singular).
Well done, Gypsy! Debbie
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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A beautiful, nostalgic memory capturing the childhood delights of summer with all those evocative senses heightened! An absolute pleasure to see, hear, smell, taste and touch:)
and blend(s) - referring to the jasmine (singular).
Well done, Gypsy! Debbie
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Thank you! I fixed it.
Thank you very much. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊