Monsters
How The Hell Did This Happen!3 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Judith, WOW! Great writing and thought-reflective too. Sometimes we create the monster within, and sometimes we create, and give power to, the monster within another ... and sometimes, we are our own worst enemy.
Well done. Words to ponder. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. M
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Hi Judith, WOW! Great writing and thought-reflective too. Sometimes we create the monster within, and sometimes we create, and give power to, the monster within another ... and sometimes, we are our own worst enemy.
Well done. Words to ponder. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. M
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Yes lol the worse monsters are the ones we have been feeding for years. They sneak up on us
Thank you for reading
Judith
Comment from pome lover
what are you talking about? Fan Story? If you are, I enjoy the instant gratification of people reading my stories and poems. Some like 'em, some don't. That's life; but submitting to a magazine or book publisher takes forever, and I've gotten impatient.
Now, if you are not talking about FS :) vat yu talkin' 'bout?
Katharine
aha! light dawns.
Pretty sure you're talking about FS. I have been reviewing all damn afternoon to get enough points, or whatever you call 'em to post my next stupid chapter. I think that's what you mean.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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what are you talking about? Fan Story? If you are, I enjoy the instant gratification of people reading my stories and poems. Some like 'em, some don't. That's life; but submitting to a magazine or book publisher takes forever, and I've gotten impatient.
Now, if you are not talking about FS :) vat yu talkin' 'bout?
Katharine
aha! light dawns.
Pretty sure you're talking about FS. I have been reviewing all damn afternoon to get enough points, or whatever you call 'em to post my next stupid chapter. I think that's what you mean.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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Not all all. You are completely wrong
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Maybe you should read the other review to help you understand the poem
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Btw I don't appreciate being misunderstood and berated
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Btw I don't appreciate being misunderstood and berated
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For pete'ssake, I'm not berating you, just trying to understand your one liner.
And if it was the charges to post on FS, I understood, as I said.
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I answered that.
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Why are you so hostile
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I'm not. You said you didn't appreciate being misunderstood and berated.
I was trying to understand your comment.
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Give me a break.
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you got it
Comment from Sally Law
Wow! This is so powerful in one line poetry. A myriad of words could fill in the blank for the monster. Great food for thought and for self-examination.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal Xoxo
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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Wow! This is so powerful in one line poetry. A myriad of words could fill in the blank for the monster. Great food for thought and for self-examination.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal Xoxo
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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Thankfully someone understands my poem
I just got berated by another review and told that she was pretty sure I was writing about Fanstory