Unseen Eyes
they know...3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a clear concise religious poem. It shows the main tenet of Christianity. The artwork is a good depiction of the metaphor/pun
in the poem
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day and weekend.
Joan
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Hi
This is a clear concise religious poem. It shows the main tenet of Christianity. The artwork is a good depiction of the metaphor/pun
in the poem
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day and weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
Comment from patcelaw
Dear Arthur, I wish you the very best with the contest. I enjoyed your poem very much and I wish you a very good week. May God bless you. Have a good evening Patricia.
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Dear Arthur, I wish you the very best with the contest. I enjoyed your poem very much and I wish you a very good week. May God bless you. Have a good evening Patricia.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
Comment from jessizero
I liked your use of the Son and the sun. You got the syllable counts right for the contest. I also liked your use of rhyme. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I liked your use of the Son and the sun. You got the syllable counts right for the contest. I also liked your use of rhyme. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024