Precipitation Suite
Spring/Summer/Fall7 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Precipitation Suite, has the proper formatting and accepts the added seasonings from the sky which seem to be applied for our better enjoyment of nature's offerings.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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This 5-7-5, Precipitation Suite, has the proper formatting and accepts the added seasonings from the sky which seem to be applied for our better enjoyment of nature's offerings.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Julie Helms
This is a fun nature haiku suite with a wonderful play on words with 'seasoning'. Maybe once the contest is over you can add an extra stanza for winter snow.
Nicely done.
Best of luck!
Julie
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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This is a fun nature haiku suite with a wonderful play on words with 'seasoning'. Maybe once the contest is over you can add an extra stanza for winter snow.
Nicely done.
Best of luck!
Julie
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Begin Again
Sounds of the seasons adding a little flavor and spice to our life. Your haiku doesn't it quite well and made me smile as I pictured each scene.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Sounds of the seasons adding a little flavor and spice to our life. Your haiku doesn't it quite well and made me smile as I pictured each scene.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed your words and repetition. You also got the syllable counts right for the contest. You did a great job with each season. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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I enjoyed your words and repetition. You also got the syllable counts right for the contest. You did a great job with each season. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You brought the sounds of nature here in your animated post full of action and I could hear the sweet buzzing sounds outside in your poem, a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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You brought the sounds of nature here in your animated post full of action and I could hear the sweet buzzing sounds outside in your poem, a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gail,
A nice poem full of fresh ideas, using one of my favorite devices - onomotopoeia! "Rain rinses jeweled leaves-- an excellent image.
Nice complementing photo.
Best wishes, Gail,
Cindy
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Gail,
A nice poem full of fresh ideas, using one of my favorite devices - onomotopoeia! "Rain rinses jeweled leaves-- an excellent image.
Nice complementing photo.
Best wishes, Gail,
Cindy
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you so very much!
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your piece vividly captures the sensory experiences of different types of rain and weather. The onomatopoeic sounds like "Plip! Plop!" and "Crick! Crack!" effectively draw the reader into the atmosphere you're describing, creating a rich auditory experience. The repetitive use of "Nature's seasoning" ties the different seasons together with a unified theme, highlighting the natural rhythms and transformations of the Earth.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Your piece vividly captures the sensory experiences of different types of rain and weather. The onomatopoeic sounds like "Plip! Plop!" and "Crick! Crack!" effectively draw the reader into the atmosphere you're describing, creating a rich auditory experience. The repetitive use of "Nature's seasoning" ties the different seasons together with a unified theme, highlighting the natural rhythms and transformations of the Earth.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much~I appreciate your thorough and helpful review.