Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Connections"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
2 total reviews
Comment from DJ Allen
I really enjoyed you story, it was very Well written, entertaining, mysterious, yet the story line moves forward smoothly with moments of suspense and excitement.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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I really enjoyed you story, it was very Well written, entertaining, mysterious, yet the story line moves forward smoothly with moments of suspense and excitement.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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Thank you DJ I appreciate your support and feedback!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was a strong chapter. I love how you've portrayed Terry's determination. I especially like how she handles Sergeant Hayes. The clash of personalities adds to her character. The interaction with Mr. Benson and the details about the missing jogger provide just the right amount of detail to keep the mystery engaging. The story is building nicely!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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I thought this was a strong chapter. I love how you've portrayed Terry's determination. I especially like how she handles Sergeant Hayes. The clash of personalities adds to her character. The interaction with Mr. Benson and the details about the missing jogger provide just the right amount of detail to keep the mystery engaging. The story is building nicely!
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank You Michael, as always your reviews are greatly appreciated