Night music
Captivating rhythms7 total reviews
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
very beautiful painting behind the words, a lot of images displayed through only 3 verses of subtle imagination. well done. very nice work. regards. Sarah
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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very beautiful painting behind the words, a lot of images displayed through only 3 verses of subtle imagination. well done. very nice work. regards. Sarah
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Thanks Sarah.
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Thanks Sarah.
Comment from jessizero
This was a great three line poem for the contest. You got the syllable count right, and I liked your mental image and the formatting of the poem itself. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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This was a great three line poem for the contest. You got the syllable count right, and I liked your mental image and the formatting of the poem itself. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Many thanks. Take care. Jen
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Many thanks. Take care. Jen
Comment from Ric Myworld
Any night dancing under the stars is magical, and it's all the better if it's with someone special. And of course, a nip or two will move everything up to even another level. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Any night dancing under the stars is magical, and it's all the better if it's with someone special. And of course, a nip or two will move everything up to even another level. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thanks Ric. You are quite right. X
Comment from lyenochka
Nice way to describe that picture and even using a rhyme in this brief poetic form. Something about music and dance can lead to a "magical night." Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Nice way to describe that picture and even using a rhyme in this brief poetic form. Something about music and dance can lead to a "magical night." Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much Helen. I really appreciate this and all the reviews.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your haiku captures a beautifully serene moment with just a few words. The simplicity of "Sway to the music" instantly creates a sense of calm and rhythm, while "Dance under the stars, so bright" paints a vivid picture of a magical evening. The final line, "A magical night," ties it all together, leaving the reader with a feeling of warmth and tranquility. It's a lovely snapshot of a perfect night, effortlessly evoking a sense of wonder and peace.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Your haiku captures a beautifully serene moment with just a few words. The simplicity of "Sway to the music" instantly creates a sense of calm and rhythm, while "Dance under the stars, so bright" paints a vivid picture of a magical evening. The final line, "A magical night," ties it all together, leaving the reader with a feeling of warmth and tranquility. It's a lovely snapshot of a perfect night, effortlessly evoking a sense of wonder and peace.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thanks for the wonderful review. I really appreciate it. Jen.
Comment from papa55mike
Ah, to let off a little pressure under the beat of a good band with a cool drink in your hand. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Ah, to let off a little pressure under the beat of a good band with a cool drink in your hand. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Thanks Mike
Comment from Jesse James Doty
You give an excellent presentation with the moving stars shining bright throughout the night. I love the way you integrate the artwork into the three-line poem. I love the metaphor of the stars swaying to the music like twinkling stars shining brightly in the star-filled night. Will wonders ever cease? What you can do with the artwork amazes me.
Jesse
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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You give an excellent presentation with the moving stars shining bright throughout the night. I love the way you integrate the artwork into the three-line poem. I love the metaphor of the stars swaying to the music like twinkling stars shining brightly in the star-filled night. Will wonders ever cease? What you can do with the artwork amazes me.
Jesse
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Many thanks for the review. Have a nice day. Jen.