Spirited Justice
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Spirited Justice chap 15"Mystery, crime and ghostly high jinks
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Comment from karenina
I'm ridiculously relieved that Becket is innocent of his daughter's murder...
It seems Eleanor will need Donatelli, Garth, and who knows who else-- to cut through this web of lies blackmail, and deceit!
Your mind amazes me.
I just sat here looking around my little nook of an office space and I couldn't describe it with the clarity you describe every space or room or office.
You've got that professional writer thing. It's a real gift!
Karenina
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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I'm ridiculously relieved that Becket is innocent of his daughter's murder...
It seems Eleanor will need Donatelli, Garth, and who knows who else-- to cut through this web of lies blackmail, and deceit!
Your mind amazes me.
I just sat here looking around my little nook of an office space and I couldn't describe it with the clarity you describe every space or room or office.
You've got that professional writer thing. It's a real gift!
Karenina
Comment Written 31-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Now I am blushing...but I must say I have had more people tell me since I started writing this book how I write like a professional and I should be in print.... I'm working on it. Nine chapters have been proofed and sent for final approval...It's not going very fast but hopefully it gets done. And by that time I might have this one finished and ready to follow Unfinished Brushstrokes. Thanks for pumping up my ego! I love it!
Smiles, Carol
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Real talent is obvious... I'm rejoicing with you, and if it pumps up your ego that's a fringe benefit!
:)
Comment from Ric Myworld
Truth never seems to matter in the bigger picture; although, it should. Pictures are painted to suit the creators, who tell the stories they want everyone to believe. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Truth never seems to matter in the bigger picture; although, it should. Pictures are painted to suit the creators, who tell the stories they want everyone to believe. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Hi there... Hope all is well with you. You've been so cryptic lately, I'm not always sure what you are saying to me...or maybe I'm just going senile. (That's probably it.) Thanks for reading another chapter and I hope enjoying. Just posted Chap. 16. Have a great evening and take care.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Oh, you never know what I might say, and most times I'm just being goofy with my replies. Anything for a laugh, even if the only one who gets it or laughs is me. Smiles and hugs back at you! Ric
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I always enjoy your humor.... and love the smiles and hugs. About to toss in some thugs and bloody stuff... You want a piece of the action? Nah!...Let's just sit back with a glass of wine and watch... okay?
Comment from royowen
With all the preliminaries of Elanor's visitation to Danni and Donatello Danni doesn't know how Eleanor can materialise and she can't, but nor can I. Later Eleanor visits Thomas, father of Lila, in prison, and assures him that she'll get him out, it seems he's been framed by Baecket, beautifully written, Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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With all the preliminaries of Elanor's visitation to Danni and Donatello Danni doesn't know how Eleanor can materialise and she can't, but nor can I. Later Eleanor visits Thomas, father of Lila, in prison, and assures him that she'll get him out, it seems he's been framed by Baecket, beautifully written, Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Danni can do all the same things as Eleanor....but she isn't allowed in the ghost world. Eleanor will fix that as she realizes Danni is ready to step up. Thanks so much for the review.
Smiles, Carol
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Sounds good
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I thought Eleanor could at least left him with a nice supper!! LOL He'd have had fun explaining that. Now more has come out, and Eleanor has more information to give to Garth and Donatelli. This was another really well written chapter, my friend. You are such a talented writer. Keep it up!! Love and hugs, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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I thought Eleanor could at least left him with a nice supper!! LOL He'd have had fun explaining that. Now more has come out, and Eleanor has more information to give to Garth and Donatelli. This was another really well written chapter, my friend. You are such a talented writer. Keep it up!! Love and hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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What a happy surprise! It's 4:30 AM and I've been at the computer since 3... the next chapter is 2/3s done, but I am in need of a cup of coffee....and I got a jolt of love from my dear friend! I'm so glad that you enjoy my Eleanor stories...because they seem to be my favorite too. A woman with a grandmother heart and a snap-crackle-pop mind. LOL Thank you so much for brightening my day before the sun even comes up. Sending my smiles, hugs and love, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent chapter, and now the truth is starting to become clearer, with Eleanor able to get some clear revelations from Thomas W. Let's hope Eleanor can ow give this information too Donatelli and Garth who may be able to work together for the good of all.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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An excellent chapter, and now the truth is starting to become clearer, with Eleanor able to get some clear revelations from Thomas W. Let's hope Eleanor can ow give this information too Donatelli and Garth who may be able to work together for the good of all.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Eleanor's doing her best but the water's still pretty muddy. Hopefully as she pieces the puzzle together with Garth and Donatelli they will get the whole picture.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Eleanor has collected some helpful information on the case from Thomas. His reaction to her sudden appearance was good. I'm glad he trusted Eleanor enough to tell her what happened to Lila. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Eleanor has collected some helpful information on the case from Thomas. His reaction to her sudden appearance was good. I'm glad he trusted Eleanor enough to tell her what happened to Lila. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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I'm not sure Thomas knew what to believe but he wasn't taking any chances of shutting Eleanor out. I'm sure Eleanor will do her best for him.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is an interesting part of the story as it turns out Eleanor can interview Thomas in Joliet State Prison. She believes he is telling the truth about not killing his daughter because she knows how dishonest Arthur Beckett is. She wants to get Thomas out of prison but for that she needs someone who is alive.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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This is an interesting part of the story as it turns out Eleanor can interview Thomas in Joliet State Prison. She believes he is telling the truth about not killing his daughter because she knows how dishonest Arthur Beckett is. She wants to get Thomas out of prison but for that she needs someone who is alive.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Eleanor can do things that humans can't...She doesn't need permission or warrants and who's going to believe aghost was thre? LOL She's got a poker ready for Garth if he doesn't get in gear...trust me!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Glad that Eleanor is following the tracks and even interviewed Lila's father in prison. Hopefully, she will get the right people together and find the "cleaner" and the real murderer.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Glad that Eleanor is following the tracks and even interviewed Lila's father in prison. Hopefully, she will get the right people together and find the "cleaner" and the real murderer.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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She might have to put a hot poker under Garth, but when he gets into the swing of things, he's going to come out like a bull. Thanks so much for the review, Helen. Appreciate your thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
It seems as though Eleanor is doing all the heavy lifting in this case. As she conducts interviews that allow her to put pieces together, she is getting to the bottom of things. I love the realistic reactions you describe of people who can't believe they see a ghost. Thomas Whitaker had the perfect reaction to an invisible lady in his jail cell. He still thought it might be a dream, but if the dream could help him, he was all for it.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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It seems as though Eleanor is doing all the heavy lifting in this case. As she conducts interviews that allow her to put pieces together, she is getting to the bottom of things. I love the realistic reactions you describe of people who can't believe they see a ghost. Thomas Whitaker had the perfect reaction to an invisible lady in his jail cell. He still thought it might be a dream, but if the dream could help him, he was all for it.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Luckily, Eleanor doesn't need a warrant for anything and she can appear inside prisons, at cemetaries, or whereever she wants with a snap of her fingers. Gives her a little advantage over the guys.... And Danni doesn't have quite the privileges that Eleanor does.... at least not yet. Thanks for an awesome review as always.
smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
Eleanor is getting some answers. I don't doubt at all that drug companies would pay or kill to have cures that would hurt their business taken off the market and destroyed. We could all be living better lives if it weren't for corporate greed.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Eleanor is getting some answers. I don't doubt at all that drug companies would pay or kill to have cures that would hurt their business taken off the market and destroyed. We could all be living better lives if it weren't for corporate greed.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024
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Amen! I don't understand how people or companies with millions or billions of dollars can want so much more while they watch others suffer so badly. They can't take it with them unless they hope they think they can use it for fuel where they are going!!!