Ol' Silver and Red
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Ol' Silver and Red, ch 13"Medeival Ohmie and the dragon Ol' Silver and Red
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Comment from lyenochka
You didn't give us any warning that you were ending the story. After all, you introduced the new troll character last time and so I thought it was going a new direction to more adventures.
Hooray for Silver and Red to even accidentally rescue May! And I like the kind dealings with the dragon who apparently never was cured of his kleptomaniac ways.
Well, in a sequel, since you started to awaken ol' Silver and Red in modern times, you could have Ohmie and May in their new roles as genius scientist and anthropologist. May could be the one to decipher dragon speech and Ohmie would learn more about dragon anatomy and they could all have an encounter with Merlin who ages backwards so he might be the same age as Ohmie and May...Just a suggestion since you asked. But you'll come up with something better and ensure a role for Blado, too! He could have been the machine operator that discovered the dragon.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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You didn't give us any warning that you were ending the story. After all, you introduced the new troll character last time and so I thought it was going a new direction to more adventures.
Hooray for Silver and Red to even accidentally rescue May! And I like the kind dealings with the dragon who apparently never was cured of his kleptomaniac ways.
Well, in a sequel, since you started to awaken ol' Silver and Red in modern times, you could have Ohmie and May in their new roles as genius scientist and anthropologist. May could be the one to decipher dragon speech and Ohmie would learn more about dragon anatomy and they could all have an encounter with Merlin who ages backwards so he might be the same age as Ohmie and May...Just a suggestion since you asked. But you'll come up with something better and ensure a role for Blado, too! He could have been the machine operator that discovered the dragon.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Thank you.
My consideration of more Ol' Silver and Red was actually a surprise to me. I added the inquiry as I was posting.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a very interesting and entertaining little book. I'm not really sure where you could go with it, but they might travel with their dragon occasionally doing good deeds. And maybe Ol Silver and Red could find a mate and start another generation of dragons. Wouldn't it be fun to have dragons as pet animals to occasionally fly away on?
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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This is a very interesting and entertaining little book. I'm not really sure where you could go with it, but they might travel with their dragon occasionally doing good deeds. And maybe Ol Silver and Red could find a mate and start another generation of dragons. Wouldn't it be fun to have dragons as pet animals to occasionally fly away on?
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Thank you.
Pets - except for the stinky part. Oh, and the fire-breathing part.
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I forgot about the fire breathing part.
Comment from BethShelby
If Omnie and May are still alive 657 years later they might need some marriage counceling. I wonder what that dragon found to eat to keep going all this time. I guess all this character have long life spans. The was quite a tale of Adventure.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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If Omnie and May are still alive 657 years later they might need some marriage counceling. I wonder what that dragon found to eat to keep going all this time. I guess all this character have long life spans. The was quite a tale of Adventure.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you. No, Ohmie and May had long passed. But dragons... they're magic.
Thank you for your support throughout the tale.
Comment from jim vecchio
Wow! First I was taken aback by Bruke's exit, so soon after we met him. If you secure a movie deal, I nominate Danny DeVito for the role. Then, the realization this mini-epic has concluded. By all means, continue the characters. Perhaps a direction like the terribly written "Rocky and Bullwinkle" movie in which the characters find themselves in our reality, are faced with a conflict, and try to find a way to return to their realm.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Wow! First I was taken aback by Bruke's exit, so soon after we met him. If you secure a movie deal, I nominate Danny DeVito for the role. Then, the realization this mini-epic has concluded. By all means, continue the characters. Perhaps a direction like the terribly written "Rocky and Bullwinkle" movie in which the characters find themselves in our reality, are faced with a conflict, and try to find a way to return to their realm.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Hmmm. I'll have to look up Rocky and Bullwinkle. That sounds interesting.
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It was called "The Adventures Of Rocky And Bullwinkle". Robert Deniro starred as Fearless Leader. Pretty awful. In the 80's as theater held a "Rocky and Bullwinkle" retrospective. Parents who grew up with them brought their small children. That was way more fun!
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You rounded this novella nicely. However, yes I could see a horde of dragons running amok and needing to be controlled from time to time by the few humans who believed in their existence. kay
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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You rounded this novella nicely. However, yes I could see a horde of dragons running amok and needing to be controlled from time to time by the few humans who believed in their existence. kay
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you. I appreciate your take.
Comment from royowen
I loved reading this very quirky tale of May and Ohmie, albeit only venturing in occasionally, but I love the thought of a dragon that lives forever, an wonder why we haven't bumped into the odd troll body part and, of course, a dragon, beautifully written Wayne, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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I loved reading this very quirky tale of May and Ohmie, albeit only venturing in occasionally, but I love the thought of a dragon that lives forever, an wonder why we haven't bumped into the odd troll body part and, of course, a dragon, beautifully written Wayne, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you. I think it does a heart good to escape once in a while.
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I agree
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I wish I had another star for your ending chapter; although, I hope it isn't truly an ending. I'd love to see them flying around on a worldwide venture. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Well, I wish I had another star for your ending chapter; although, I hope it isn't truly an ending. I'd love to see them flying around on a worldwide venture. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you. What good is a dragon if you can't use him?
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LOL. I couldn't agree more.