Liquor
a 2-8-27 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Truly inspiring. So much is said under the influence of alcohol. I have had secrets told to the wrong person, only to cause a disaster. I have to read them all, but yours tops the list.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Truly inspiring. So much is said under the influence of alcohol. I have had secrets told to the wrong person, only to cause a disaster. I have to read them all, but yours tops the list.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Jade.
Comment from Wendy G
A witty way of warning people about the benefits and significant danger of alcohol. It is clever and a good message within a few syllables. Well done. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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A witty way of warning people about the benefits and significant danger of alcohol. It is clever and a good message within a few syllables. Well done. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Wendy
Comment from Begin Again
That made me chuckle! Yes, you most definitely can get loose lips and end up in deep trouble when you swallow too much of the hard stuff. Your picture and the words were perfect for each other. Thanks for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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That made me chuckle! Yes, you most definitely can get loose lips and end up in deep trouble when you swallow too much of the hard stuff. Your picture and the words were perfect for each other. Thanks for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Carol
Comment from Harry Craft
LOL! Oh, so true. This is a great 2-8-2 poem! I can't write like that but I am glad some can. I really enjoyed this and thought it was great! Such a good topic and such a reality too! Best wishes to you!
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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LOL! Oh, so true. This is a great 2-8-2 poem! I can't write like that but I am glad some can. I really enjoyed this and thought it was great! Such a good topic and such a reality too! Best wishes to you!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Harry
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Roger that!
Comment from Jacob1395
I think this is a piece that will resonate with many people and I liked how you wrote it. Yes liquor is something that can help boost our confidence, but it's not always great for our body. An excellent piece of writing. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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I think this is a piece that will resonate with many people and I liked how you wrote it. Yes liquor is something that can help boost our confidence, but it's not always great for our body. An excellent piece of writing. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thanks, Jacob
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
LOL this is accurate. A really good entry for the 2-8-2 writing prompt. the twist being in the final 2 words/last line was perfect and has the desired surprise effect. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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LOL this is accurate. A really good entry for the 2-8-2 writing prompt. the twist being in the final 2 words/last line was perfect and has the desired surprise effect. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2024
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Thanks, Marilyn
Comment from royowen
Liquor or drugs loosen the very thing that keeps our safety net in place, our self control, they cause us to do foolish things, it seems so many crimes are committed by those that take alcohol and drugs, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Liquor or drugs loosen the very thing that keeps our safety net in place, our self control, they cause us to do foolish things, it seems so many crimes are committed by those that take alcohol and drugs, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2024
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Thanks, Roy
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Welcome