Take your life back
Just a poem about my life2 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was a very inspiring poem! I enjoyed your rhymes as well as your message. I especially like the last two lines. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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This was a very inspiring poem! I enjoyed your rhymes as well as your message. I especially like the last two lines. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. This poem means alot to me as I wrote it about my own life
Comment from Amelie Johns
This is a wonderful poem that tells a story that I'm sure many readers can relate to in some way or another. The story in this poem gives encouragement to keep going and keep fighting. As I say to my daughter in times of distress 'there is always a way'. Now at this young age it could be something simple like her head getting stuck in her jumper. But down the line life will inevitably throw much bigger things her way and I think the message you are delivering though this poem is so important. You have to keep fighting, picking yourself up and dusting off the shoulders. I am so glad you have reached this point and wish you all the happiness in the world that you so deserve.
Best wishes,
Amelie
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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This is a wonderful poem that tells a story that I'm sure many readers can relate to in some way or another. The story in this poem gives encouragement to keep going and keep fighting. As I say to my daughter in times of distress 'there is always a way'. Now at this young age it could be something simple like her head getting stuck in her jumper. But down the line life will inevitably throw much bigger things her way and I think the message you are delivering though this poem is so important. You have to keep fighting, picking yourself up and dusting off the shoulders. I am so glad you have reached this point and wish you all the happiness in the world that you so deserve.
Best wishes,
Amelie
Comment Written 21-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2024
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Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. This poem means alot to me as I wrote it about my own life
