Act of Endurance
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Comment from Kahlani
Hi TPAC, I found this a little difficult to follow. I don't know if it is the way it is set out or the topic. But I appreciate your efforts. I wish you all the best in the contest.
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Hi TPAC, I found this a little difficult to follow. I don't know if it is the way it is set out or the topic. But I appreciate your efforts. I wish you all the best in the contest.
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
Comment from DonandVicki
Well written, almost like a stream of consciousness about misinterpretation. I enjoyed the last line most: "No. You must have been there, feeling whole sequence, at the beginning, living that time its act, that moment, intensities; before you can give out advise: your thought." Well done.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Well written, almost like a stream of consciousness about misinterpretation. I enjoyed the last line most: "No. You must have been there, feeling whole sequence, at the beginning, living that time its act, that moment, intensities; before you can give out advise: your thought." Well done.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Glad certain aspect of this write, were appealing to your interests. Thanking you for those kind thoughts: and generous rate.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
We're all searching for some truth in this complex world and, increasingly, it seems to be masked and distorted. It's so often true that we need to have experienced an event or trauma ourselves before we can even start to understand the feelings of others. Small edit - advi(c)e.
Thank you for sharing your interesting and relatable perspective. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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We're all searching for some truth in this complex world and, increasingly, it seems to be masked and distorted. It's so often true that we need to have experienced an event or trauma ourselves before we can even start to understand the feelings of others. Small edit - advi(c)e.
Thank you for sharing your interesting and relatable perspective. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Thanks for that heads up. Love your comments. Thanking, you also, for your generous rate.
Comment from gramalot8
I love the way your words kind of ramble... making sense within the context of your poem.
In life many times we are bombarded with unsolicited afive, remarks, suggestions, ... al jumbling up our innermost thoughts.
Good message and thanks for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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I love the way your words kind of ramble... making sense within the context of your poem.
In life many times we are bombarded with unsolicited afive, remarks, suggestions, ... al jumbling up our innermost thoughts.
Good message and thanks for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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I appreciate your comment, pertaining this write. Thanking you for your generous rate.
Comment from Nicki.B
This is so true. Although many of us have gone through similar situations, no one really knows like ourselves of what it really felt like for us, and similar situations can affect people differently aswell. Well done.
Best Wishss
Nicki
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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This is so true. Although many of us have gone through similar situations, no one really knows like ourselves of what it really felt like for us, and similar situations can affect people differently aswell. Well done.
Best Wishss
Nicki
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Glad certain aspects were appealing to your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate.
Comment from estory
I actually found the jumbled up language here and the kalaidascope syntax to be interesting. I think it speaks to the modern sense of a confused experience of rationale, a mockingbird amalgam of logic, if you will. People today seem to put themselves together out of a crazy quilt of items picked here and there at random from a mixing bowl of cultures. estory
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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I actually found the jumbled up language here and the kalaidascope syntax to be interesting. I think it speaks to the modern sense of a confused experience of rationale, a mockingbird amalgam of logic, if you will. People today seem to put themselves together out of a crazy quilt of items picked here and there at random from a mixing bowl of cultures. estory
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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No. I'm ignorant, pertaining my English written expressions. How bad presented: I hope something is clear for my readers. I'm trying to get better. Thanking you for those profound words: plus generous rate despite.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
I liked this prose poem about the meaning of one's life. You asked a lot of questions and provided some tentative thoughts and conclusions about the meaning of life.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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I liked this prose poem about the meaning of one's life. You asked a lot of questions and provided some tentative thoughts and conclusions about the meaning of life.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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I see you relieved this write statement, making you think: outside your norm. Thanking you for that statement and generous rate.
Comment from Begin Again
I believe the saying is "Until you have walked in my shoes." I've had people say how sorry they are and that they understand the grief.... but they may mean well, but they can't know how horrific it is until they truly feel it. Add to it the deceit that is blended with the truth nowadays even on the news, and nothing is clear.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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I believe the saying is "Until you have walked in my shoes." I've had people say how sorry they are and that they understand the grief.... but they may mean well, but they can't know how horrific it is until they truly feel it. Add to it the deceit that is blended with the truth nowadays even on the news, and nothing is clear.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2024
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Yeah. You have to know the complete event. You have to endure that moment. Thanking you for all. Have a great day.
Comment from patcelaw
it is very important that we ourselves have been broken into pieces like a puzzle and it's only then that we truly understand how other people feel. May you have a wonderful day and I wish you the very best with all of your writing.
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it is very important that we ourselves have been broken into pieces like a puzzle and it's only then that we truly understand how other people feel. May you have a wonderful day and I wish you the very best with all of your writing.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024
Comment from ESOSTINE
Well said, dear TPAC. One stands in a better position to provide advice when he has a full grasp of the story. A prior experience and true desire for support will help more. Well done, and do have a lovely day.
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Well said, dear TPAC. One stands in a better position to provide advice when he has a full grasp of the story. A prior experience and true desire for support will help more. Well done, and do have a lovely day.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2024